Untitled~~I killed myself again,To see if I still breathe,Myself, whom I arraign,With anger and fear seethe,I focus on the rope,That holds my lying blood,Though Iâve lost every hope,I wait the coming flood,A black, shattered blade frees,The gallows hang alone,Every last breath I seize,To fix this heart of stone.
WOW. Amazing. I love the imagery in this, and especially the word plays. It was short though. I wish it was longer."The gallows hang alone" very very good twist there.
It's really dark and depressing. :-/
Just came to AG forums to see this post after playing Slender.*Goes to room and get my pink stuffed dolphin*Great poem, my friend....
Wow it is pretty depressing, but I agree with ragepower, definitely invokes some powerful imagery.
OMG its awesome Sadly i cant ever do something close to that, because right now i cant understand half of the words..
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