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andrewheath7
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andrewheath7
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Nomad

this is my time to shine so shut up fot one more time wile i just shine
Im standing in time square i got blond hair
thats the start hit me back just to chat

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flappybob999
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flappybob999
797 posts
Peasant

Well, it doesn't ryhme, has no point, and is three lines long. Look at the topic "Challenge Strop to rap here!" Topic for some inspiration.

Karoc
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Karoc
433 posts
Nomad

No its dumb and rap is old listen to grunge or heavy! So late in time..

EL_Dyablo_666
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EL_Dyablo_666
579 posts
Nomad

I think it's pretty good.

tehblackknight
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tehblackknight
60 posts
Nomad

wow that is not good I do not even listen to rap and i know it is bad sorry but it just is

kingryan
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kingryan
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Farmer

It could be better.
The weathers getting wetter.
Rap needs to flow
Thats what you gotta know.
I use it in my rap
I don't wear a baseball cap.
Take my advice to heed.
Its just what you need.

KingRYan

demaneyeskyo
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demaneyeskyo
6 posts
Nomad

Lame

skater_kid_who_pwns
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skater_kid_who_pwns
4,374 posts
Blacksmith

for all of ya'll that said it sucked
let see ya chuck a rap out my way
then see what everbody gotta say
i bet ya'll cant rap for crap
but just take a shot
now that you all got taught
by the rapper suppreme
go grab yo' team and all the help
that your gonna need
if you wanna try and beat me!

ialwayswin
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ialwayswin
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Jester

I hear what he's talking about
if you suck,just give it a shout
let the words flow off your tongue
theres no such thing being to young
so get up and give it a shot
maybe you'll end up under the spot
I may be the king as you can see
but theres not need in trying to beat me
just start of small
end up tall

Klaushouse
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Nomad

DONT JUDGE RAP! Someone might like it, someone might hate it.

I personally hate it.

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