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thoadthetoad
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thoadthetoad
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all poems by e1 welcome, just don't put a comment to a poem like: good poem, sux!, bad, not good, etc. etc.

From the sky fell a sword,
which hit the earth so well.
When it fell, it hit a lord,
who cursed it to live in hell.

The sword, held a grudge,
and grew in power still.
The sword cut a smudge,
out of the firery hell.

The sword felled a thousand men,
in slaughters and plauge.
It killed champions, and survivors,
intil there was only ten.

Soon the fire of the sword grew into a glow,
it's time to pull the blinds.
Now death, is much more slow,
it turned to the human mind.



I made this off the top of my head, so please dont flame it too badly, k?

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thepyro222
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Not bad... I like the symbolism. try this one


Waiting in the Rain
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I stand waiting in the rain,
But you threw me away, I feel the pain,
I am nothing without you,
Tears stain my eyes, like the grasses' morning dew,
All I wanted was a chance to woo you,
But in fragments, it blew,
A dark emptiness fills my heart,
A black board, my picture you throw a dart,
You tried to push me away,
I awaken to see you everyday,
I feel as though you are the reason that I'm alive,
You twist the knife, but I just won't die,
I want you in my life,
For you, against an army, I would strife,
but all you do is push me away,
Just know that I wake for you everyday.

sinu11
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sinu11
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It is in spanish (because I am spanish):
Si la mierda fuese oro
tu serias un tesoro

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