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as they entered the castle, Dazzark suddenly stopped short. Pale as a ghost, he fell to his knees. He was unable to get up, and he was trembling. Out of know where, a big man around 6 foot 5 entered the room. In his hand was a shining orange oject. Dazzark hissed and turned away at the sight or it.
"What is that? Who are you, and what are you doing to him?" The big one commanded.
The man spoke. A deep, dull voice that made the hairs on the back of the big one's neck stand stright up.
"I am Goreg. It appears that your friend is a shaman, no?
This object here disables any magic within a mile of me. There are only 3 of these in the world. 1 has been destroyed, 1 is burided almost at the earth's core, and the last one is being held by me. With this stone still intact, there is nothing your shaman friend can do to help you."
"You bast@rd! Put the stone down." said the big one.
Goreg spoke again. "I'm afraid I won't do that" he said.
"PUT-THE-STONE-DOWN!" shouted the big one as he raised his pistol. "I'll shoot you right now if you don't."
"Really?" qestioned Goreg. "To bad you little toy won't be able to harm me. You see, with this stone, not only does it block out magic, but it also stops bullets, and any other kind of flying object. Stones, arrows, you name it. No hard will be done to me. The only way you can kill me is hand-to-hand. Now enough talk. Leave this place, and I might let you leave with your life."
"I don't think so" Said the big one. He took aim and fired at Goreg. BANG! BANG! BANG!. All of the shots glanced off to the side. Relising that his guns were useless, the big one dropped them, and raised his fists. "I can take this guy" he thought. "what I don't have in speed, I can make up with power."
"So reluctant" Goreg said. "Looks like I'll have to dispose of you now..." With that, Goreg slid the stone into his pocket, and raised his hands. "Now lets fight!
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They started off in a grappel. Both opponets were locked. they exchanged punches and after what seemed like a lifetime, Goreg stepped back.
"Impressive" he said. "Too bad I'll have to end this fight so soon"
With that, Goreg drew a knife out of his belt, and lunged towards the big one. The big one dove to the right, and almost missed Goreg's attack. Almost. Goreg's knife buried itself into the big one's left arm. Roaring with pain, the big one punched Goreg in the leg as hard as he could. Instead of hitting Goreg's leg, he hit a sharp object. The stone. When he hit it, He heard a crack, and the big one was certin he broke part of his hand. The impact still sent Goreg sprawling back a few feet. Goreg got up again, and walked slowly to where the big one was getting up. In desperation, the big one picked up his pistol, and shot at Goreg. The fact that the bullet curved away didn't surprise the big one, but were it curved to did. The bullted curved to the right, and it grazed the stone in Goreg's pocket. The orange light flickered for a second, but it came back on. The big one looked towards Dazzark. He was getting to his feet! The stone was damaged, so Dazzark got some power back... Then The big one relised that while the stone would protect Goreg, it couldn't protect itself. Pissed off that the big one managed to harm the stone, Goreg ran foward, and picked up the pistol himdelf. He aimed at the big one, but the big one was too quick. He lunged forward, and slamed his shoulder into Goreg's stomach. He heard a 'woossh' as the air left Goreg's lungs.
"I need a weapon." thought the big one. He picked up a torch hanging from the wall, and turned to face Goreg.
To the big one's surprise, Goreg was allready back on his feet. Shouting and inaudible phrase, Goreg charged the big one. As Goreg swung his knife at the big one, the big one ducked, and hit the stone is Goreg's pocket with all of his might. The orange light went out, and the stone shattered into a million pices. But this time, the attack didn't even phase Goreg. Goreg punched the big one, in the head, and the big one fell to the ground.
Goreg jumped on him and hissed "die motherf***er" Goreg brought his hand down, and his knife went towards the big one's heart.
Just before the knife could reach the big one, Goreg stopped. He didn't even move. Goreg's head started to move back. The terrifed expression on Goreg's face told the big one that Goreg wasn't doing this on his own. The big one heard a snap as Goreg's neck broke. Then, Goreg's dead body fell to the side. As the big one looked up, he couldn't help but smile as he saw Dazzark walk towards him.
"what the hell was that?" asked the big one
"dark magic" responded Dazzark
"Sheet, no wonder people fear shamans" the big one said.
"yup" replied Dazzark. "I'm just glad that cursed stone is
destroyed. That thing was draining the very life out of me."
"I'm glad it done too" said the big one as he picked up his guns. "Anyways, now that you have you powers back, we need to get moveing before the eniter German army getts here"
"True, but let me heal your wounds first" siad Dazzark.
Dazzark placed his hands on the big one's arm, and murmered a spell under his breth. The big one watched in awe as he saw his wound heal. There was a red scar, and his arms felt really sore, but other then that it was healed.
Streaching out his newly healed arm, the big one said, "time to leave. that fight must have woke the nabiors."
Dazzark grinned, and then floowed the big one deeper into the castle.
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*sorry if there are alot of spelling errors. I think I fixed a few, but I tryped it up pretty fast, so there might still be a few remaining.
