As a few of you may know, I've formed a band with the_manta. I am a pianist, singer, and an aspiring songwriter. I try write a song just about every month...but in reality the lyrics to my songs only take a couple of hours to write, so i could write more often. I would like to share the songs i write with AG in hopes that i will be able to get advice, criticism, and new ideas. I hope that your opinions will help me to expand my song writing talents. Right now, I only have the lyrics to two songs completed. I'll post one now, and post the other sometime later.
This first one was actually the first song i completed. It was about a girl at school that i obviously liked...maybe a little too much. Anyway, here it is.
Everything:
You're standing there, So perfectly, Your long brown hair, You're all I see.
And Later On, Out in the Breeze, I see you smile, And I just freeze.
Is it possible to be so beautiful, When I see you all the angels sing, You're so cute and sweet and you're never dull, And to me you're everything. Yeah.
You're simply everything to me, I wonder if you ever think of me, When I hear you calling, It feels like I'm falling,
Cause you're simply everything I know, I wonder if I ever made it show, The sound of your laughter, You're the one I'm after, Cause you're everything.
When you speak to me, The way you make me feel, Everything you say, It's just so unreal.
Your hazel eyes, Like rising suns, In sunny skies, Yeah you're the one.
Is it possible to be so beautiful, Angels tell me that you're everything, You're so cute and sweet and you're never dull, And it's you, you make me sing, Yeah.
You're simply everything to me, I wonder if you ever think of me, When I hear you calling, It feels like I'm falling,
Cause you're simply everything I know, I wonder if I ever made it show, The sound of you're laughter, You're the one I'm after, Cause you're everything,
You're everything, Yeah you're everything, You're everything, And it's you, you make me sing,
Cause you're simply everything to me, Just the thought of you sets my soul free, All these feeling for you, How could I ignore you?
Cause you're simply everything I know, I'd follow you wherever you may go, The way that you daze me, Oh you amaze me.
Cause you're simply everything to me, I wonder if you ever think of me, When I hear you calling, It feels like I'm falling,
Cause you're simply everything I know, I wonder if I ever made it show, The sound of you're laughter, You're the one I'm after, Cause you're everything,
I can do deep-level thinking like that... I just rarely if ever apply it. (Cue slightly insulting comment from WarTank :P) Anyway, my favorite one yet, and yours as well, I bet.
Hm... I like these songs, but I kinda wanna hear your voice singing them, the song may be good, but the some people are better suited to different songs... (Singing style I mean, You wouldn't have a rapper sing a country song... >_>
Anyway, my favorite one yet, and yours as well, I bet.
yup
I can do deep-level thinking like that... I just rarely if ever apply it.
then why don't you???
but I kinda wanna hear your voice singing them, the song may be good, but the some people are better suited to different songs...
yeah, I want to be able to put them somewhere, but I don't have music them yet(I got a job and I'll have a new keyboard to make music in a month or two). until then, I guess these are just poems with a tune that exists only in my head.
it's been a while, but I have a new one. This is one of those songs that simply comes from the randomness of my heart.
I Lost:
I lost my strength just the other day, I turned my head and it was stripped away, my dear, And now I'm feeling the weight of the atmosohere.
I lost my key on Carol Street, I saw it pass from a back bus seat all alone, And now I'm running cause I can't go back home.
Stand back cause I'm running for my life, and I, I gotta say that I've never felt so alive.
I've gone insane trying to figure this out, And then I wonder what was I thinking about, I'm losing things that I said were mine, I'd get 'em back but I'm running out of time, I walk away and think of what was said while, I try to tell myself that it's all in my head.
I lost my hope in a crowded room, It's hanging now from a crescent moon in the sky, And now it shines for the whole world every night.
I lost my fate just last night, I took too long and it passed me by now it seems, The only thing that keeps me awake is my dreams.
Stand back cause I'm running for my life, and I, I gott say that I've nevver felt so alive.
I've gone insane trying to figure this out, And then I wonder what was I thinking about, I'm losing things that I considered mine, I'd get 'em back but I'm almost out of time, I walk alone and wonder what was said while, I try to tell myself that it's all in my head.
I lost my life in a ame of hearts, All kings and queens, they said don't even start, should've stayed, I would've won If I'd only played...
Stand back cause I think I've lost my mind, I gotta say that I was never really so alive.
I've gone insane trying to figure this out, And then I wonder what was I thinking about, I'm losing things that were never mine, I'd get 'em back but I just ran out of time, I walk away cause I don't know what was said... I try to tell myself that it's all in my head. It's all in my head.
(by the way, you may notice I will have less love songs because I don't really like that girl any more)
Wow, I know it's been a while, but I want y'all to know that I am(slowly but surely) writing a song. I've been thinking long and hard about it because I really want to impress my new girlfriend with it. Thanks for the patience, I hope to be done with it soon.
Well, inspiration hit today. Though these aren't my best lyrics ever, I have incredible ideas for the instrumentals on this one!
Speechless:
So I said I'll write a song One for you to right these wrongs, one to Make you sing along Make you see with me's where you belong
Never knew it'd be so tough Tried to find words when life gets rough, oh well Guess I'll push my luck This is the 3rd but it's still not good enough. Cause
I'm speechless Speechless over you I'm speechless Cause you feel it too I'm speechless Man it's something new I'm speechless Speechless over you.
I try to tell you you're in my dreams That I messed up it wasn't me, then you Tell me I should leave, But you should know I'll never leave you.
I'm speechless Speechless over you I'm speechless Cause you feel it too I'm speechless Man it's something new I'm speechless Speechless over you.
I wanna take evertime we meet, Just hold you close and feel your lips, so sweet Count the times you breathe The thought of you it makes me wanna sing.
I'm speechless Speechless over you I'm speechless Cause you feel it too I'm speechless Man it's something new I'm speechless Speechless over you.
I feel like crap...I'm posting my new song because of recent events with Sam... Here it is, My Great Patterns.
My Great Patterns:
We live our lives as lonely things It's always just the same old thing, it's true When everyday is something new. And through the love and hate we bring I just need something for holding on to So let me hold on to you.
Open the skies and I'll show you the stars You can feel from their warmth that they're not very far Open your eyes and you'll see where we are The world fades away and the cities are ours. It's you and me, nothing else matters These stories are my great patterns.
It's burried in a cloudy past The pictures and the broken glass on me You wonder how this came to be. And after everything that's passed They all believe it couldn't last, we'll see And this is my honest plea.
Open the skies and I'll show you the stars You can feel from their warmth that they're not very far Open your eyes and you'll see where we are The world fades away and the cities are ours. You scream until my heart shatters These stories are my great patterns.
It's after the uncertain times It's still unsure, it's not alright, you know But no one can let it show. So can we fall back into line You decide if you're still mine, oh no Can we never let this go.
Open the skies and I'll show you the stars You can feel from their warmth that they're not very far Open your eyes and you'll see where we are The world fades away and the cities are ours. And no one seems to think these matter These stories they're my great patterns.
New song!!! it's completely different from y others, but i like diversity, so i publish it proudly
New World:
This is a reality check, So pack your things, You won't come back, for me.
Cause this is the fatality wreck, For all we know, Can we let go, completely... I guess we'll wait to see.
Can You Remember, How we used to be, I'll wait here forever, For you to believe, Cause anything happens, Where no one can see, The city's on fire but, The world is asleep.
Why aren't we speaking louder? Sing til our mouths go numb. Why can't they just be proud of, What we want to become.
I can't believe our freedoms free, But we just still won't take it. We know how easy it can be, But we can't seem to make it.
With burning hearts, The world's still cold, So let's make a change, A move that's bold.
We're moving through, With flags unfurled, To make a mark, in our new world.
A reason to let go, That's better for us, When the reasons we're fighting, They cannot be just, So let's build an empire, United by trust, Our leaders and politicians, Will learn to lose their lust.
Why aren't we speaking louder? Sing til our mouths go numb. Why can't they just be proud of, What we want to become.
I can't believe our freedoms free, But we just still won't take it. We know how easy it can be, But we can't seem to make it.
With burning hearts, The world's still cold, So let's make a change, A move that's bold.
We're moving through, With flags unfurled, To make a mark, in our new world.
This is a morality track, So don't look back, We'll make it if we believe,
This is the finality of, A world without love, Just wait and soon you'll see, How much better we can be.
With burning hearts, The world's still cold, So let's make a change, A move that's bold.
We're moving through, With flags unfurled, To make a mark, in our new world.
I started this one back in november, then put it away, never to be seen again, until today and i decided to finish it.
Where I Am:
Slow down, Talking about things that you don't understand, Packing to go places that you've never been. So how, how are you gonna get away, make a play, go escape, and never change. Just another false hope heartbreak
Sing, watching skies blowing in and out of home, This one's grey it's just a little too alone, You leave, leave the only place you've known, called it home, want a throne, now you're gone. Try to make us change our tone.
The grass is always greener on the other side, And you spend all your days trying to change the tide,
Hiding in your room beats sleeping cold outside, This space is closing in, but it's enough to get by. The sky looks better when you're looking from the ground, Safe and sound... So here is where I stand And I'm happy where I am.
Good times, hanging on the bridge before sunrise, Talk about having faith to jump next time, Now you say you know you could, wish you would, afterall it could be good. Can't believe you had me fooled.
You lie, tell me everything that I just can't believe, Laugh it off and walk away so I don't see, When I hear that you've been holding out, held it in, make believe, just preted. Tell me what you've done with my friend.
The grass is always greener on the other side, And you spend all your days trying to change the tide,
Lying in the dark beats dying in the sun, Another day to rest, and 20 miles to run. The sky looks better when you're looking from the ground, When you're around. But, here is were I stand, And I'm happy where I am.
You leave home, Clinging to the things, That just aren't yours to hold.
Thinking we, Should just, Admire you for being bold.
Still you're just sinking... thinking... about all you've left behind...
The grass is only greener in you're twisted mind, And you've been swept away, by a stronger tide.
So steady as we go, you're living on the street, The greenest grass I've seen lies right beneath my feet. The sky looks better when, you're watching from the ground, Out of town... So here is where I stand, I said, We're won't go so far, Cause we're happy where we are.
So it's been almost half a year since I've written lyrics, but today i just felt inspiration and the result was my strangest song yet. It's loosely inspired by the fact that my girlfriend is on vacation in california for the whole summer and the fact that I just got back from church camp. Can't decide if i like it or not. Oh well, at least it's something :P
Never Good
As I stand on the shoreline Between happiness divine And the burning hell that lately I call home Always wishing that I wasn't so alone
As I sit by the fireplace Picturing the pretty face To which I've been forced to say goodbye for now Always thinking of it as I look around (Listening for the sound)
Maybe now thing will be different Maybe something else could change Maybe I'm a little nervous Maybe you're a little strange
Maybe I could do the wrong things But you could do them too Maybe I'm better for now But I am never good without you
As I walk through the fire Burning with desire Always pushing me trying to make me fall I was lucky just to make it here at all
As I dance in the twilight Thinking that it's alright That this world is just as good as it can be That I'm seeing things that not too many see (Maybe it's just me)
Maybe now thing will be different Maybe something else could change Maybe you're a little nervous Maybe I'm a little strange
Maybe I could do the wrong things But you could do them to Maybe I'm better for now But I am never good without you
As I sit here beside you Thinking everything we've been through It was certainly a paradise in hell Secrets that no body else can tell (No one here can tell)
Maybe things won't be so different Maybe I will never change Maybe we are just too nervous Maybe we are just too strange
Someday I might do the wrongs things But I know you can too Maybe I'm better for now But I am never good enough I am never good without you
