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Ok so basically I started this story right...Well I don't know if I should finish it because I don't know if it is that good. Please leave comments about it..and most improtantly tell if I should continue it...


It was a cold winter in the city of Azucrlin; the trees had shed all their leaves, the streets were paved with snow, and smoke was bellowing out of the fireplaces. Through the frosted windows of one building was a classroom being taught by one teacher. The teacher's name was Mrs. Stein, a teacher known not only for her strictness but also for her very hard courses. She had crushed the souls of many young dreamers and in many of her students. In her classes she had not only disproven many different legends and fables but also had filled the children's head with logic and scientific theories. For some, she was the teacher they only got in their dreams, but for others she was a teacher they only got in their worst nightmares. Out of all the boys in the class there was one who was the biggest dreamer of all-Johnathan, who as a nickname used Johnny. He had a vivid imagination, one to rival all the stories and fairy tales. Each day he sat at his desk, dreaming of a story to act out with his friends. And each day the teacher would come over and smack his hand, bringing him back to reality, the place he disliked most of all. When he could think no more, he would think of a story he concaucted one day during class; this particular story, like a lot of others like it, had a handsome and daring prince who also acted as a knight which saved the princess. But unlike others, he always dreamt he was knight's assistant. After he saved the princess, her beautiful sister would come and they would go into a life of bliss where they would live happily ever after and he would never ever grow up. He had always imagined the story but never imagined how the princess was in distress or how the prince would save her. However, today he was just a mere boy who was wanting to get out of school so he could go home and enter the trial and triumph of saving a beautiful princess.

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