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Thats it? lol I think you should expand on it.

A gun what a wast
It blew up in my face

There was a terrible hospital bill
The money I had left was nil

I needed money to pay the rent
I wound up sleeping in a tent

I decided to go into a life of crime
I earned nothing but a dime

I went to jail
Tried to break out in rain and hail

I stole the security guard's gun
I finished him and now he is done

I shot the gun again, it jammed

A gun what a waste
It blew up in my face

NEVER USE A GUN

I hope you guys and gals like it.

Pretty good.

Strange indeed, though the lyrics are almost genius. (Jokingly Sarcastic)

Ha, it was funny, but the flow wasn't all that great. lol