Ahhh yes, someone who's getting pivot. Well, for a beginner it's average. Wouldn't have took long. I suggest making less slides or increasing the speed to it. Not much complaints, just the basic stuff like stories and a bit more interesting, but I can tell you weren't aiming for that in this one. Hope soon you'll be at jdogg's level. Good job.
oh....thats how, and it went faster on pivot before i uploaded and i was able to read the stuff cause it went a lot slower. I don't know y its going like that here...