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thoadthetoad
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"Witch!" a priest called out across the cathedral, "A vile creature which plagues our very existence! A witch, who hath sold their soul to the devil!" the priest slammed his clenched fist onto the mahogany podium in which he was preaching behind. He quieted himself for a moment and looked at the pews. A quick count of heads said that there were over 40 people in the cathedral at the time. Most of the village had obviously gotten his message of danger.
"This vile woman has been doing awful things to my brothers and priests. Making them commit to most, if not all, of the seven deadlky sins," the priest scowled at the pews, looking at most of the people in the eye. "Lock your doors, keep each other in check, and make sure to keep your children safe. This," he paused for a few seconds, "witch will be dealt with within the week! I have sent for a message. A message to a man who knows how to properly take care of these creatures..." the priest seemed like he was regretting calling for him.
"Everyone here is to treat them with the respect, his name is Ornel," the priest looked down towards his a book on the podium. beside it was a small piece of torn paper. It was a note. It said to contact "me" should the need arise. Needs include anything that requires the destruction or detainment of "evil" creatures. "God help us."

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kingryan
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Farmer

Oh great...Strop is plaguing another village...

He'll learn to stop eventually!

Sounds like a good start Thoad...

Woody?

Kyouzou
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Jester

Woody!? Good start had a small typo with deadly lol, other than that it was good if a little short...

XSilentPhantomX
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tiiimmeeee toooo plagueeee lolz XD seems like a good start.

thoadthetoad
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Peasant

Woody?

I refuse to acknowledge him as a character.

HE IS A PIECE OF BARK ASDFKKLKLKLKLK
DDX
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I feel like... this title. is like super cliche? Idk I dun like cliche stuff, since it is like super mainstream an all.

though it's pretty solid werk.

Kyouzou
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It it a little cliche considering the number of books about witch hunts, but in this one for some reason it just screams supernatural. meh...

thoadthetoad
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Peasant

I feel like... this title. is like super cliche? Idk I dun like cliche stuff, since it is like super mainstream an all.

Disliking things in the mainstream simply because they are mainstream is just as bad as liking something in the mainstream because it's mainstream.

Words of Wisdom from Thoadthetoad.
DDX
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no, it's overused. thats what I mean by cliche, it loses meaning. I don't hate mainstream cause it's mainstream. if anything I live in the mainstream

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