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Dazpiece
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I noticed that there is a haiku contest, but how about also having a tanka topic?

Japanese Tanka (short poem) is a form much older than Haiku. It consists of five unrhymed lines of of 5-7-5-7-7 syllables.

In English, the 5 units are usually spaced out over 5 lines. It has many similarities to haiku, but I find that sometimes the final two units (7-7) leave you more space for closing or providing perspective.

It would be great if this could be turned into a contest, but it's also good for just a bit of fun, right? For now, post about any theme that comes to you.

Here's a tentative offering:

I feel the warmth of
Being together
Only when we are apart
We can not be one because
I must leave for Albion.

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Dazpiece
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Ah man I screwed it up:

I feel the warmth of
Us being together here
Only when apart
We can not be one because
I must leave for Albion.

Kyouzou
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Lol we had one, but it lost interest and was lost to the forums, you can probably find that if you use the search, in the Suggestions thread.

Dazpiece
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Ah I see, well hopefully there will be some interest and people will post their compositions.

(If not then I guess I'll let this thread go the way of the Dodo.)

Kyouzou
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Lol I've never heard that before, it took me a second to see what you were getting at lol...here's one my old ones. I'm to lazy to actually write one at the moment.


Singing with the wind
Shining emerald in sunlight
Casting dappled shadows down
Twisted roots snaking through soil
Gold leaves shine in autumn light

If you can't tell the theme is Trees

Dazpiece
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I like it, though I don't agree that the syllables add up to a Tanka, lol. Yours seems to be : 5-8-7-7-7. However, I like the imagery very much.

Kyouzou
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Yeah I messed up a little bit on that one, probably wasn't the best best choice to display lol, the middle is 7 syllables.

shin.ing emer.ald in sun.light

Zophia
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shin.ing emer.ald in sun.light
Shi-ning e-me-rald in sun-light.

Ahem. >_>
thepossum
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So, why don't we all just proclaim Dazpiece the new judge and go to the Tanka contest thread?

jkmadman1
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That's funny Were learnig poems in language arts and it just so happens that we learne tanka today.O.o

Kyouzou
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lol we went from haiku's to test lol....


Shi-ning e-me-rald in sun-light.



Lovely....apprently I suck with syllables...yet I managed to atleast place in several contests...huh.

Maybe you say it differently? The way I say it there is no em-ER-ald its Em-Rald only two syllables...
Zophia
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Maybe you say it differently? The way I say it there is no em-ER-ald its Em-Rald only two syllables...
But thee e D:

I seem to have split the syllables a bit wrong, though... S'osed to be em-er-ald according to this dictionary.
I'm not saying pronouncing it without that e is - wrong, but I think it might be due to dialect that you skip it.

*writes note to self about stopping with tangential stuff in threads*
Dazpiece
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So, why don't we all just proclaim Dazpiece the new judge and go to the Tanka contest thread?


I second that motion.

That's funny Were learnig poems in language arts and it just so happens that we learne tanka today.O.o


Did you make anything? Would be cool to read it.
MoonFairy
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Weeeeelllll. I made another tanka thread. XD i didn't know about this one. but if y all wanna move to that one, i would make Daze a judge too/

Dazpiece
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Sounds good! How about I choose the theme for and judge the next one?

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Alrighty. That is kewl with me.

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