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cookiedude111
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Zakura is about a ninja who incounters many hard tasks and takes down many enemys with just fists, sherukins, kunais, and a sword.

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thoadthetoad
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Peasant

Wait, what?

Just post the story, don't tell us a sentence worth of information about a guy we don't know.

But already I have the feeling that it'll suck.

vinster132
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Is he like Strop?

But anyway, I agree with thoad....

FallenSky
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Peasant

Thoad's right; that's kind of an abuse of the right to actually be able to create threads...

SirLegendary
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Duke

Is this a story? I don't see anything if there is.

pHacon
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But already I have the feeling that it'll suck.

That is quite rude, but this:
Thoad's right; that's kind of an abuse of the right to actually be able to create threads...

is quite correct, so it can be easily excused.

Is he like Strop?

NOBODY can be like Strop, vinster...

I hope when you do get around to posting the story (if you do) you use better grammar than I saw in here though.
MoonFairy
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enemys

Enemies.
sherukens

Shurikens.
sword

Go on ahead and use Katana if you are gonna say shurikens...
And the name sounds like Sakura from Naruto. If you are only gonna post a sentence about it at first, at least make it interesting. :/
pHacon
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Go on ahead and use Katana if you are gonna say shurikens...


Don't you mean a ninjato or wakizashi moon?
MoonFairy
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ehhh I would go with ninjato. but any of em count lol

DDX
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Zakura is about a ninja who incounters many hard tasks and takes down many enemys with just fists, sherukins, kunais, and a sword.

sorry be blunt, like a sack of bricks. but so far 100% of your posts contribute this much to the forums **makes a 0 with hands. that's right 0. i can safely say out of 10 topics you start 9 will get locked. and much like this one.
because wtf is this?? srsly? you make absolutely 0 effort to even post something worth looking at. your single sentence does not even fall under art, music, or writing. it is just regurgitation (don't know that word? well it's vomit) and it is basically a reflection of what you take in. crap.

i dunno if you have some kind of language barrier? or some kind of disability, but please at least make some kind of effort to at least post something with substance, so I (among others) wont die a little on the inside after reading one of your 39 (currently, im sure you wont be stopped until you get a ban in your face) posts. kthxbai.
thoadthetoad
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i dunno if you have some kind of language barrier? or some kind of disability, but please at least make some kind of effort to at least post something with substance, so I (among others) wont die a little on the inside after reading one of your 39 (currently, im sure you wont be stopped until you get a ban in your face) posts. kthxbai.

This.

That is all.
Deathsilencer
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Where's the story?

Strop
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Right. I see. Most threads start with at least something fleshed out, so... maybe try doing that?

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