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sprite14
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While driving down the street one day, i saw a black car with the windows blacked out from view. I knew that this was illegal, so I decided to make up a story. Here it is.

The man in the car was an international super spy on a mission to stop a major crack deal that could end the biggest crack dealers in the United States. When i saw him pull up into a dry cleaners, i knew that the drug dealer kings were hiding their goods inside the dry cleaners. The spy casually goes up to the dry cleaners, and all of a sudden, pulls out a gun and shoots a washing machine. The wall behind it cracks and after shooting it again, a large ammount of drugs spill out from behind the washing machine. The spy leaves after arresting four men and one women who are in charge of the large supply of goods.

Thats my story and im sticking to it.

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CommanderDude7
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Nomad

I like how he just walks in and then starts shooting the washing machine.

Kyouzou
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You need to work on your tenses, you can't start of past then suddenly switch to present.

sprite14
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oh well i just made this up on the way to a friends house one day. lolzz.

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