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This is my story based on the RPG I made a long time ago. It is the story of the survival in a world full of war...

Inroduction...

Xyronia. A beatiful world full of magic and other fantasy stuff. The mighty empires live in peace until one day. That day was the eclipse of the three moons. Everybody celebrated! The peace period lasted from the Peace-eclise (the eclipse when all wars was stopped) 14 672 years ago. Lets celebrate for another LONG period of peace!!! But then... The night sky was for a moment as bright as the day-sky!!! The fertile lands of Xyron, the land where the peace-party was has been hitten by a burning stone. The area around it has been vaporised and turned into a barren toxic desert. These who survived the impact has been killed by the creatures wich crawled out from the stone. Nobody who was there has survived. The stone endured almost to the next eclipse. One year before that (today) the empires are at war. The war is as old as the stone. Only a few people has been chosen to stop that for once and for all...


The stories of the empires...

Polaria
The empire of the cold-hearted yetis. These creatures are big and strong. These cruel creatures are big monkeys adapted to live in the coldest region of the planet Xyronia. They dont need armor and they are masters at using the club.

Norraia
The viking empire called Norraia is inhabited by cruel humans. These berserkers are fearless and strong. They often sail south to plunder the other empires and they are taking the loot to the island Njorras and the tales about the treasures say there is really a lot of that there! The vikings are master at using the axe.

Tirriwon
The empire of Tirriwon is also called the north-human empire. Tirriwon is a rich empire. In that kingdom the noble knights live and fight to stop these wars forever. Much campaings was made to destroy the stone. No one was succesfull. These humans are masters in using the swords.

Babones
The land of Babones is inhabited by the cruel baboons. These monkeys are intelligent and live like rogues. They are at war with Tirriwon. The jungle where they live was once much bigger than now, but then when the stone fall down, king Tirriwas (The first king of Tirriwon) wanted more land. They burned parts of the jungle down and now the remaining baboons want revenge! They are great at using two weapons at once, best two daggers.

Horryson
The lands of Horryson. These lands once was rich and strong. But when the Wars started, the yetis invaded these lands and shattered the once so powerful kingdom into pieces. The surviving people are now poor and live like peasants. They can fight greatly with the peasant stuff like dung-forks.

Dragon Isles
These islands are inhabited by the wise old dragons. These reptiles try to avoid any war, but the yetis are invading and plundering the wisdom of these reptiles. These reptiles keep the oldest secret of the world in the oldest and wisest of the dragons. Dragos the king of the dragons. He keeps the secret how to control the fire...

Maquaqo
The empire of maquaqo has been for many years the only country on its continent. But then the Vikings started to plunder these lands. After many years of fighting the inhabitants of maquaqo (the macaques) have been destroyed at the north and the vikings have taken it over. The macaques want revenge!!! They are good at using the bow.

The Desert
The stone has falled down much years ago. As that happened the life around the impact site has been instantly vaporised. The stone is begining to glow. These generations call it now "The Eye". Nobody knows whats going on there. Anybody who goes into The Desert, will never return...

I will continue it later. Say what do you think.

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Oh, and here is the map:
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/4329/theempiresofxyronia.png

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I like it. The map was a nice touch.

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And the story starts...

Chapter 1:
The peasant attack

The empire of the yetis was never in a greater war. Only minor attacks at the border with the lands of Horryson. These easily defendable attacks begun as the Yetis united and made an empire. With their power they destroyed the once so powerful kingdom. Now, shattered and weakened, they want revenge on us. Everybody of them losed something. Some have losed their family, some their wealth, and that is why they want revenge. The attacks got incridibly strong the last time. The yetis think they are getting help from the Tirriwon empire. One day, during a blizzard, a yeti was hiding in his cave. His name was Tanam Uron. He saw a strange man in black robes in the blizzard. He goes outside and he finds a letter on the ground. It says:"Meet me at the Ice Mountain. Come alone."
Tanam decides to go. As he arrives, the strange man in black is on the Ice Mountain. He comes near and the stranger says: "Welcome Tanam. I was waiting for you."
"Why are you going after me?! Why?" Tanam answers.
"Because you are one of the chosens. I cant tell you more. You will find out what that means. Anyways, you know the north of Polaria is being attacked by the Horryson people." says the stranger.
Tanam asks: "Why are you telling me that? I know it!"
"That is because you can be the only one who can save Polaria," says the stranger, "Here is a map." He gives Tanam a map.
Tanam asks: " What is that X on the map? Is it a treasure?"
"No. It is just the war camp, the Horryson major militiary outpost to attack polaria. You must destroy it." says the stranger.
"I understand mostly but what tha chosen one..." Tanam dont finishes the sentence. The stranger disappears in the snow.

To be continued...

Say what do you think!

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I like the new character. He adds some mystery and makes you wonder what Tanam was choosen for.

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Chapter 3:
Tanam's quest

After the stranger disappears Tanam asks himself: "What that had to mean? I don't know, but something says I should go. I will go."
He starts the journey to save Polaria... After 5 hours of wandering he sees a small yeti village. It is under attack! Tanam runs inside and sees the peasants plundering it and enslaving the Yetis! One of them says: "A yeti! He wasn't there. Go and kill him!"
"Just try. You will see..." says Tanam. They run into him from much sides. He swings his club and everybody is on the icy ground. He takes his club and crushes their bones. A half of them escaped when they saw Tanam. The rest was killed by him. The last one alive says: "If you will... *cough* not kill me, I will say you why... *cough* why we are invading your land."
Tanam says: "Okay, but if you will lie to me, or betray me, your death will be much more painful and gruesome as you would ever think. Now begin."
"Okay," he says, "we are getting help from the empire of Tirriwon. Thy gave us troops to capture the yeti lands. We had to enslave your people and give them to them. They don't said why, but they said they will give us much money for that."
Tanam looks at the dead bodys with anger and hateful screams out: "REVENGE!!!" A yeti says Tanam: "We all are so happy you saved us. Please take something from my armor and wepon store. It will be free." He takes a spiked club. He and the other guy start the way to the war-camp.

To be continued...

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I like it, but grammar would be nice and you skipped ch2 lol

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