I wish I could be More than what may I wish I could change More than I say There's such a huge range Yet my life is just gray But now I see there's more to this day
I think that poems done, I don't think it can really be continued past that point. It reads more like a song that a poem to me though, either way it's very cool.
Yeah, the poem turned out really nice. The stanzas actually have some sort of basic rhythm to them, which is pretty uncommon with these types of threads.
