ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHey! So, I'm going to try throwing one of my poems out there, and just hope that some jerk doesn't steal it :/

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DarkestNite
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So I am posting one of my worse poems so I won't feel that horrible if someone steals it... tell me what you think


Burned in your lies
Smoke in the air
Tears in your eyes
Spilling everywhere

It's what you deserve
With what you said
Spoke past reserve
You made your bed

Think it's unfair?
So did we,
You gossip with no care
Now you will see...


http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100000955817447&v=app_2347471856#!/photo.php?pid=107505&op=1&view=all&subj=129295460435520&aid=-1&auser=0&oid=129295460435520&id=100000955817447

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DarkestNite
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meh... i tried adding a pic... buutt it didnt work!!

SirLegendary
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( hehehhe wth? well hmm just report to a mod

DarkestNite
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Nomad

help finding a mod?

Avorne
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http:/user/Zophia
http:/user/Strop

DarkestNite
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Nomad

Hey, thanks. =]

thisisnotanalt
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you. Write in poetry contest. Nao.

Nice poem, btw. I'll give you a full crit, if you'd like.

And just google part of the poem with quotes to see if someone stole it. If someone did, register and send banhammery hell raining down on the plagiarizer.

skater_kid_who_pwns
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And just google part of the poem with quotes to see if someone stole it. If someone did, register and send banhammery hell raining down on the plagiarizer.


except you can't really. Unless the quote is posted on the site, they don't know who it is, so they can't ban the. I know what I just said was confusing, But I didn't know how best to say it.
MoonFairy
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I like it. It is worth the risk lol. Could bbe a bit longer though
And I agree with Alt. You should write in the poetry contest. It is fun

thisisnotanalt
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except you can't really. Unless the quote is posted on the site, they don't know who it is, so they can't ban the. I know what I just said was confusing, But I didn't know how best to say it.


All you really need to do is provide hard evidence. Googling something in quotes just looks for the specific phrase and not just the words . . . .
Google567
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Well since most people on here wouldn't know what to do with a piece of poetry I think your safe.

skater_kid_who_pwns
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All you really need to do is provide hard evidence. Googling something in quotes just looks for the specific phrase and not just the words . . . .


But unless they have matching screen names, you won't be able to find out who it actually is.
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