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I wrote this poem for another website, and decided, why the hell not bring it AG Btw, please don't look at the part where it says &quotossibly die" and assume I mean I want a violent revolution... because that's not true. I wrote this poem in about 30 minutes, and it only has two prior drafts. I think it's fairly good though, let me know what you think. If you disagree with my poem, feel free to make a 'rebuttal poem' lol. I don't even have a title for this thing, but I still hope you enjoy.

Be Advised: Your life and dignity are at risk
We must fight, possibly die, to preserve them
The greedy demons with suitcases are in the homeland!
They hold in them: concentrated power, fear and inequality
The demons will package them nicely and sell these things to us
But, if we stand strong, and together, we can return them
In exchange we can receive something better, and more gratifying
We have no choice but to do this, it is our duty as human beings
Our duty I tell you
It was given to us by the sympathetic and wise judges of Nuremberg
The time has come to replace this unjust system
This system that we have accepted as life
Replace slavery with freedom
Replace selective power with equality for all
Do not stop until even the frailest man can have a voice
For if we choose amnesty...
History shall record us as cowards and victims
Who chose imprisonment forever, over life

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