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bigjacob
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I liked frankensteins story and i made one too it is not copying off him in anyway.It is not going to be a bad story like my other ones.And all characters used are being used with permission.

The legend Of AG
Prologue
Once upon a time there was a land, A land founded by the first men on earth. They eventually built a thriving city and since then they have evolved much but another land that was bent on world domination its name was Miniclip yes they were founded by Eskimos who had no creativity but weaponry and siege machines they have already gotten kongregate on their knees their only real threat wasArmorgames whose power and wisdome was vast but one day Miniclip gave the order to siege AG their troops outnumbered them and their machines tore down our walls AG defended itself the best it could but despite their best efforts under leader Bigjacob they were defeated and so AG is now in a dark hour.Will a hero rise no one knows.



Chapter 1
The rise of a hero.



âPeople fled to New grounds, my even parernts left we should have tried harder.âSays Slayer Shadow to his friend Brian266.âThey left when I was only 9 I was raised by the wolves aint many still in AG no one but you me and the wolvesâ. Brian nodded his head and took a bite out of a nut ,Brian happended to be a chipmunk who Slayer trianed to be able to combat enemies such as miniclip soldiers who tried to colonize AG but Slayer knew that if they build cities here this land will become another part of miniclips vast nation of lands such as Kongregate crazy monkey games and much others that were so pathetic they were named things like Freegames and 1000s of games.Slayer left his cave with brian And remembered what the last soldier who tried to colonize here had told him right before he died,âYour efforts are a waste of time boy Miniclip will soon be using their new weaponry that is cabable of wiping out entire lands Including your wasteland you call home pathetic boyâThen the man had coughed a lot and finally fell to the ground.Slayer knew that he had to stop this before it happened so He decided to set out And defeat the evil Miniclip king
Myspace1111.So Slayer set out with his sidekick and set his mind on getting to Miniclips citadel He grabbed his few belongings And stuffed them in his bag.Slayer knew it would be difficult but he didnât care he had to save his home.And off he went to face a power that was stronger than he could imagine.

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bigjacob
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Please Tell What you think of it.I will accept anything on a 1- 5 rank.

SlayerShadow
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lol loved the ending but the fight seen could've been way more epic though man have me resurrected and then me and myspace battle and then he wins again and eats a donut

bigjacob
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I know did i not tell you about the SECRET ENDING
Chapter 5 the real battle

Slayer approached Myspace Then quickly swung his sword at him and said"thats what you get"Myspace quickly rolls out of the way and says "Ha!Youre as pathetic as your father boy"Then he quickly jumped and was about to land a serious blow when Brian Jumped out and bit him."OOOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!
You little Brat then he sliced furiously at Slayer NonStop.Slayer counted it and said "What do you know about my Father""Why should i tell you boy"Then Slayer tackled myspace and put the sword to his neck"thats why now tell me before i get ugly""How Pathetic can you get my Boy how could you not figure out THAT I AM YOURE FATHER."WHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAT.....No youre not my Father would never do this""Wrong again i was rather pathetic in my earlier days but i only said i was pathetic to give me enought time to do this he kicked off slayer and Snarled"If only you had Turned Evil when you were young my boy""Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo"yelled SlayerThen myspace decided he had enough he pressed a button on his throne and and donut monsters rolled out of secret holes and grabbed Slayer and killed him.MWWHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHA

Shenko
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in both endings what happened to brian?

bigjacob
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He fled for the safety of the donut storage.Yep chipmunks love donuts.

Graham
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There are two chapter 5s.

*runs off*

jjwood69
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Good way to end,with two Chap. 5's.

bigjacob
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Graham ones a secret ending.One a bad ending and a more epis ending.

SlayerShadow
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I like the secret ending. It took me a while to read it sorry

Shenko
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bigjacob that was pretty good you should make a sequal like the lost chapters or something like more of slayershadows travels

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Wow, it's awesome! You're cool! I love this stories!

bigjacob
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Thanks everybody and as after i get the permission from yal the story will continue with a sequel and various new madeup characters
Other features will be:
a brand new hero that will help slayer
The risks a priest is taking to revive slayer
more action packed stories than ever AAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNDDDDDDDD
You can be in it as along as you ask first chapter on Saturday Folks.

bigjacob
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1 more day til the Legend Of AG 2 Comes out get ready folks ask now andll get to be in the story along with the regular characters first person to ask gets to be the new and improved sidekick details will be revealed soon.

bigjacob
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sorry the storys cancelled too bad but dont got enough time

SlayerShadow
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So I knew it the series was too good to cancel of course

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