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bigjacob
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Ok were having a slight change of plans and is going to do Book 3 right after 2.

So heres the cast list
slayer
jakob
brian
sunshine
myspace
random people
noobslayer
Slayers parents
and more.......




I will have to start the story yesterday so tell me whats you think about a book 3.

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SlayerShadow
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ok i like it but you need a tad bit more sword fighting and mage blasts. Other than that I think it is totally amazing. I tried to set it up for lots of action. Don't forget to describe the scenery. Oh and extend the chapters with continuations if you have to or make like 50 little chapter. These are just my thoughts you don't have to use them if you don't like them. I know you busy alot.

bigjacob
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Thanks i guess i put what i can manage i think it doesnt matter what people think i just like writing stories xD

SlayerShadow
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cool i agree it's still awesome so far keep it up man you read the prologue to my story yet. it gets happier

bigjacob
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Chapter 2
Malkoirs Attack

Malkoir crept up on Slayer and jumped and swung at him epicness produced a shield from a powerstone shaped like a banana.Slayer stayed under the magic shield and sliced at malkoir.Malkoir threw ninja stars at raz and sunshine.Raz called small demon monsters out of the ground,they grabbed the shriken and ate them then charged Malkoir away."Ill be back with a army under the leadership of carnage"screamed malkoir as he ran away.Slayer told sunshine"He said carnage that means hes recruiting a army he might have sloth too.""Possibly but i think myspace is our first priority so lets get to Newgrounds for AG supporters."Sunshine told him ."What about my parents,"asked slayer" oh yeah I have to do it with a magic runestone in Newgrounds so lets go.Raz said"What about me theyll get terified at the sight of me."Sunshine said"Ill use a transformation spell to make you human but still have your demonic powers""its a deal"

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good story.

bigjacob
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Chapter
3
Epicnesses ........



The gang was traveling through the hills when suddenly someone who looked demonic jumped out of nowhere and grabbed Epicness."Look out slayer said too late.Raz suddenly whispered something to slayers ear."What you cant be serious raz,"I am look epicness didnt get captured shes getting sent to the underworld to transform epicness in to a demon."No but raz i dont have time to go back there i need you to go rescue her."Alright and he opened a portal and walked through and vanished.
Slayer proceeded with sunshine to the city but where stopped by a tribe of grass trolls."You will not go furhter pass me.Grumbled a big one "we fight you,suddenly a small one piped up"under the leadership of myspace of course'the big one said you idiot go back to the tribe village"ok.now lets go slayer started hitting at the trolls as fast as possible.Sunshine started throwing magic bolts conveniently shaped like donuts.It sent a troll flying into the air.The chief attacked but...chapter end wait til next time.

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Very good! Looking forward to more!

darkwolf1
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same here.

Shenko
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nice dude

SlayerShadow
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great story keep it up jacob it's amazing

bigjacob
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Look even though im on hiatus i have to manage my story so i can continue the 6 part saga.Dont expect frequent updates though.

Chapter 4
The Brawl


The chief hit him with a hard blow that sent Slayer surpising flying in the air.This is for Epic yelled Slayer as he got up ready to strike the chief with his hardest blow he could manage.Slayer grabbed his sword and hit the grass troll so hard that he busted open(the trolls body)So Slayer Told Sunshine that we needed to go before the pizza moon rises."Ok slayer said Sunshine Lets go.So slayer traveled for a few hours with Sunshine while this was going on.
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Raz had opened a portal to the underworld so he could save Epicness,but he had only fought several demons such as death hounds and fiery imps and underlords.So now raz decided he would use his powers to make him able to see Where Epicness is his in his mind.He thought he saw her being dragged into a cave being followed by a demon spirit man and his baby brother who was watching mario on his ipod.Im confused about the baby thought Raz but what the heck lets do this.
Til next time......

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Nice i like it keep it up.

RightwRong
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When do I come in bigjacob? rightwrong

bigjacob
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I didnt know you were coming in.Sorry dude.

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