just add gunpowder and a thing that you put tnt in it.as you go into a building with the explosive,it will get harder and harder into the building because of the security is in there.after excuse after excuse,you will finaly get to that point.and you put in that key,A key that unlocks there death!!!!
Orion, I think he meant "burned alive". K Wolf, I'll leave. I would advise everyone else to do the same. He neither wants nor can make use of any CC we can offer him. And out of politeness as well, we should stop.
One last piece of advice though; if you want people NOT to comment on something, DON'T share it with them.
Darkwolf, you've already been told many times about the grammar, but what people say is true. I do not understand what this is. Are you trying to build up suspense? If so it is not working.
These people, the frequent visitors of the Art, Music, and Writing section, are trying to help you become a better writer. Of course you should take their advice! Many of the people here are very good writers. Maybe you could take the time to spell check. It will save you time instead of telling everyone about how you are "still working on it".
Frankly, I am so annoyed at you and your writings. It's elementary(like the Twilight series) and it is hard to follow.
wow that was pretty terrible try using writing words instead of the thing you put tnt in also maybe you should rearange words (so it still makes sence)but is in an order that sounds better
