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I am the mountain,the solid rock, the earth;
I am impenetrable, a fortress; a god,
I am blank, unemotional,my will implacable.
no sight nor touch nor memory;I am alone.

then it came; no, she came,
she was stirring,beauty, emotion, happinessfreedomexcitement and disturbing all at once!
She was an idea, a message that rushed right through me,
The idea that,life was possible that i, beast of solitude could could have something i dared not think about, that i could fulfill my life with one clichéd word:love.

I am now peaceful as i lay dying, the lover long dead; knowing i soon follow, staring at the long part between birth and death I impart to you,dear human:contentment is the greatest thing to achieve.

what do you think. Any improvement needed?