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Hi, and welcome to Spooky Cookie! Are you ready to be frightened?
No? Oh, you wet your pants when you read creepy stories? What are you doing here then, get out! I just had this carpet drycleaned! *shoves you out of thread*.
Now...all you true-blue horror aficionados out there, welcome to Spooky Cookie! This is a thread based on CreepyPasta, which I read frequently, and I had an idea for this thread. That is, of course, where I got the idea for the name(like it?). It was actually originally going to be named Yeti Spaghetti, but I changed my mind.
Anyway, I intend for this to be a haven for all scary/creepy/frightening/spooky stories or poems that you can eat! Oh, you don't know what I'm talking about with "eat"? Well, it's simple. Stories are Spooky Cookies and poems are Yeti Spaghetti. Stories are yummier than poems.
This thread is open to everyone who wants to participate, and I intend it to be somewhere that people who enjoy getting the bejeezus out of them/doing the same to others can hang out! Any campfire stories or urban legends you know? Share it here! How about a story you wrote? Well, let's hear it! Want to get scared? Read here! The only rule is, everything has to be written by you. If it's an urban legend, that's the exception. Don't post anything here unless you wrote it or it's just an urban legend that you can share. And please, pretty please, try to make it original! If it's an urban legend or scary story, why not make it location specific? Anyway, have a summary cookie.
This thread's purpose? It's meant to be somewhere where everybody can post urban legends or spooky stories they've written.
The thread's rules? It has to be original(no plagiarism), and if it's a true story, say so. Preferably though, I'd say the better spaghetti would come from a fictitious story.
The idea? Scare the shiz out of the members of AG!

Now, to start us off, here's a Spooky Cookie I wrote concerning Highway 191 in Utah...

Have you ever heard of Highway 191? Probably not, but I have. Let me explain. It runs through Montana, Utah, Arizona, Wyoming, and it's one of the longest 3-digit roads in the country. It was originally constructed in the mid 1920's, and ran primarily in Idaho. It's changed a lot since then. One way it's changed that you've probably already figured out is its location. Another way that you may not have realized that Highway 191 was originally Highway 666...the Devil's Road. Its name was changed primarily for a few reasons; one, it was creeping people out, two, punks kept stealing the road signs, and three, it's Utah. What do you expect?

"I don't believe you," the detective yelled at me. "I think that you did have something to do with Mr. Young's disappearance."
"I swear, I didn't!" I yelled back, tears in my eyes. "He was my friend. Don't you think I've been through enough?"
"Where's your proof?" the detective demanded.
"I don't really have any," I whispered.
"Well then, you're guilty," the detective bluffed. Sniffling pitifully, I handed him the letters.
"Read this correspondence," I said, "It's all I can give you." I handed him the letters.

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October 24, 2004
Dear Mom,
My sincerest apologies go to you as I was unable to visit your house for the Fourth of July as we had originally planned. However, I promise to you that I will be there for Halloween, and will stay for Thanksgiving as well. Earlier today I set off for your home in Monticello, with Will and Joe, two of my college buddies from BYU who also have relatives in southern Utah. Will, Joe, and I have just bought three rooms at a cozy little family-run hotel off SR 30, and we're about to get some dinner, so this letter will be short. I've just left Brigham City and am driving south, to the more scenic parts of the state. My buddies Joe and Will are with me. The road's pretty barren, but we put on some rockin' music and it was great! Will, Joe, and I fought over the wheel for a while but after that we got along fine. When it started to get dark, we pulled off SR 30 and found this hotel, run by a father, his wife, and their four kids. I will update you next week via letter, as promised, but at the moment there's dinner to be eaten and sleep to be slept!

Your son,
Mark


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October 25, 2004
Dear Mom,
I woke up at approximately 3:00 am, and I could have sworn I heard some kind of tapping noises while I was trying to sleep last night, I stayed up well past midnight unable to rest. When I woke up early this morning, I heard the tapping noises again, however last night they seemed to get incrementally louder, whereas this morning they seemed to be fading away. I was exhausted and sleep-deprived but Will and Joe seemed fine, so I decided not to say anything. I guess it's just that this road seems a bit barren, even frightening. I'm certainly not used to the weather! When we went downstairs to pay our bill to the hosts, they were all gone; the mother, the father, and the children. We scratched our heads at that, but weren't too concerned; after all, they had spoken to us last night about going north, to the mall in West Valley City this morning, and being that West Valley is far away from here they would've had to have woken up early to get there before rush hour so they could be back soon. Anyway, we left our payment on the counter then continued on our way. The rest of the day passed fairly uneventfully, we simply drove as usual. We were unable to find a hotel tonight, but Joe's truck has a camper so we rolled out some old sleeping bags Will brought and slept that way. Tonight I've discovered something; I hate being out in the middle of nowhere. It's so quiet, so dark, so lonely. I don't know how you stand it.

Your son,
Mark


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October 27, 2004
Dear Mom,
Last night the tapping continued, to the point that I did not sleep one bit. I woke up this morning bleary-eyed and exhausted, and as a result Joe is driving right now instead of me, and I'm writing my letter as he drives in the car. I'll describe what we see pass us by as we pass it; I see the Wasatch Mountains and Soldier Summit, and it's beautiful. The leaves have all finished turning a variety of red, orange, and gold, and the sight of the snow-capped mountains peeking out behind the golden hills is truly breathtaking. I wish you were here to see it! Anyway, I expect to be with you by the 27th, at the latest. We have been driving along at a respectable pace for the last few days, but we won't be able to keep it up. We're giving the summit roads a fair amount of respect, after all, cruising along at a snail's pace of forty miles per hour. We plan to stop in Provo for gas and whatnot today, but will be back on the road by no later than 6:00 pm. Please excuse the shortness of this letter, but as you have already learned I am exhausted at the moment, so I'm going to clamber out of the cab and into the camper, and catch up on my sleep.

Your son,
Mark


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October 28, 2004
Dear Mom,
Darn it all! I am sorry Mom, but I'm afraid I might be a bit late to reach you. While I was asleep, Joe and Will decided they were bored, apparently, and Joe started driving faster, speeding even. He rammed into the guardrail and totaled his truck. Luckily, the Utah State Patrol found us and saved us. I was asleep at the time, like I said, but here's how the highway patrolman said it happened; Joe was going at extreme speeds and smashed into the guardrail with extreme velocity, totaling the truck and ripping the guardrail away. We fell straight into Soldier Summit and rolled all the way down to the bottom, at which point, due to all the screaming and jostling, I woke up, however my legs were pinned down and I couldn't move. However, a highway patrolman had been nearby and had seen the crash. He radioed in for an ambulance and reinforcements, then dragged Joe and I out of the truck. We were taken via ambulance to the emergency room in Helper, but there's bad news. Will died in the crash, and Joe is in a wheelchair-the doctors say indefinitely-however I've escaped with no more than a broken rib and fractured patella(that's the kneecap). The highway patrolman that saved me and the doctors all agree that if I had been in the cab with them, I would have died and gone to Heaven, but because I was in the back, I survived. I thank God for His mercy upon my life, and I swear that I will still make it to see you by Halloween as promised. Surely this is a sign that God wants me to see you, because obviously if I'd died in that crash, our plans would be ruined.

Your son,
Mark

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"You see?" I told the detective. "There's your proof."
"Wait..." he said, fumbling through his pockets. "Letters! Letters to the mother...we found those on the body." Now it was the detective's turn to pull out some letters and hand them to me.
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October 30, 2004
Dear Mom,
Now I am so utterly alone. Without Will and Joe, there is no one to go South with me, and I almost wish I could turn back, but I've promised you I will visit by Halloween, and I will keep my promise. In the last two days, I've hitchhiked from Price down south to Moab, and I should be to Monticello just in time. I know how you disapprove of hitchhiking, Mom, but better to hitchhike and keep a promise than to not and break that promise. I apologize for my lack of a letter yesterday, I know I said I'd write every day, but I was so exhausted and in so much pain that I could not. I am sorry, however I am making up for that today. When I was little and Dad died, you told me something. You told me to look at the bright side, not the dark, and so that's what I will do. I'll look at the bright side. The bright side of this is, even though one of my friends is dead and one is a paraplegic, the tapping noises have stopped. Last night, even though I did not sleep, my waking moments in the darkness were not haunted by some paranormal tapping sound.

Your son,
Mark


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October 31, 2004
Dear Mom,
I have reached Monticello at last! I don't even know why I'm writing you a letter today, but I am. Happy Halloween, Mom. I've braved the Devil's Road to be here for you on the Devil's Day, and so much has happened to me on the way. All I can say is that I will look at the bright side now.
I will be with you.

Your son,
Mark

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"I didn't know he kept going..." I said, amazed. "I mean, I know Mark really wanted to be there for his mom on Halloween...but dang." The detective started to walk away, and I followed in my electric wheelchair.
"I think you've been cleared as a suspect, Joseph," the detective told me, sitting down at a computer console and typing rapidly. "But something isn't right about those letters."
"What do you mean?" I asked.
"I mean look," the detective told me, pointing at his computer. He'd pulled up some kind of file; the coroner's file. I examined it.
Anne Marie Young
Occupation: Retired.
Family: Widow, mother of one.
Date of Death: October 31, 1999
Cause of Death: Drowning due to Negligent Homicide. Mrs. Young was driving to Provo when her car was hit by a cement truck working on Highway 666. Young's car spun out of control, smashed through a guardrail, and fell into the Colorado River. She was stunned from the initial impact and thus incapacitated and unable to escape the sinking vehicle, she drowned. Driver of the cement truck admitted to intoxication at time of crash, further inquiry on the part of coroner and police department is requested.
Other Notes: Was driving to Provo to visit her son, Marcus B. Young, for Halloween at the time of the accident.

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I would like some CC on the above Spooky Cookie.

So, please contribute! If you don't feel like writing, CC is also welcome if the writer requests it.
Have fun eating and baking Spooky Cookies and Yeti Spaghetti!

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And these have to be completely original, Hyper?

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And these have to be completely original, Hyper?

If it's an urban legend, that's okay, but it can't be a really really popular urban legend that we've all heard a million times. Or, if it's a ghost story your friend told and you liked. These are the only acceptable cases. And most importantly, if it's not yours, say so.
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If it's an urban legend, that's okay, but it can't be a really really popular urban legend that we've all heard a million times. Or, if it's a ghost story your friend told and you liked. These are the only acceptable cases. And most importantly, if it's not yours, say so.


Alright. My grandma, who has lived in Ciudad Juarez, Mexico, all her life, told me about this:

When she was a kid, (she described herself as being 10-14 at the time), her family moved into a new house. The previous owner, a lady in her 40s, had hung herself in the last room down the hallway. The house, by the way, was shaped in an L. The entrance, at the bottom center of the L, and in between the two hallways was the yard, which had a massive Oak tree in the middle. The lady had hung herself in the last room on the left hallway. Her family just used this room for storage.

The first time they saw her was in the garden. Her older brother, (She had two), was lying in bed, not able to fall asleep, with his back against the wall, (beyond the wall lay the yard), and he had a window right above him, against his back. There was a mirror on the opposite wall, which, if he looked at it, would redirect his gaze to look through the window he had his back to, thus looking into the yard. In the mirror he saw something white, like a cloth, and turned around to look through the window.

There, in the yard, he saw the woman, hung on one of the Oak's massive branches.

The second time she was seen by Grandma's father, in the wee hours of morning. He would get up before dawn, since his job required him to. They had an outhouse in the yard, which was accessible through the left corridor of the house, the door being on the opposite wall of the last room. He looked down the hallway, and saw somebody with curly hair walking down the hallway, hunched over a candle, headed out the door to the outhouse. My Granny's father, thinking it was his daughter, Lala, let her go into the outhouse first. He waited a while, and then got impatient and started knocking on the door to the outhouse, telling her to hurry up. After no response, he opened the door, only to see that she was not there and was soundly asleep in her room.

The third sighting was done by the eldest brother, who married and, not having a place to settle with his wife, (construction was being done on the house), took the last room on the left corridor, the room in which the previous owner of the house had hung herself. According to my grandma, her brothers wife woke to find herself staring at the woman, who was hanging right above her. The wife had said that the woman had no face.

I am sorry for the confusion in this story, I shall later post the story again with a diagram of the house.
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9/10! gj

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Alright, I know it's not nighttime, but this is my attempt at a real scary story. Of course it's still going to make you think a little, but here it is.

Hello, my name is Ethan. Ethan O'Brien. I'm afraid that some of the younger readers here might be disturbed by some of the more graphic scenes in my story, so here's my warning; this story may not be appropriate for everyone. It's scary, it's gory, and above all it's frightening. I should know; I've lived it, and I can swear on the terrifying qualities of the tale. I don't know exactly why I've chosen to compile what are, by far, the worst moments of my life into a story, but I have. Perhaps I thought that I could share this burden with the world, perhaps I just wanted someone else to know. But now everyone will know the story of Ethan O'Brien. Some question the validity and truthfulness of the statements below, and I hereby assure you they're real. I lived through every syllable. So pull the blankets up high, turn off the lights, and watch as the moon dips below the horizon in the night sky outside.
I give you the story of Ethan O'Brien.

Black Knight: The Story of Ethan O'Brien

You know something I've always thought was strange about life? The things that you remember. Take me, for instance. I don't remember being born, I don't remember my sister being born, I don't remember meeting my grandparents for the first time or going to the beach with my parents or any happy memories like that from my childhood, memories I'm sure most children hold tight and cherish for the rest of their lives. Not me. No, the things that I remember are much darker; the first day of school, when I was tormented constantly by bullies, and could not find my way anywhere. I was humiliated, I was embarrassed, I was miserable, and I just wanted to see my Mom or hear my Dad, have them hug me tight like they always did and say that everything would be all right. But no matter how much I wished for them to be there, they never appeared. Another thing that I remember is when my little kitten Sassy died. She was a little white scrap of fur with a black nose and green eyes, the cutest thing you could imagine. I had just gotten her for my sixth birthday and my friends and I were playing with her at the party. Then, my little sister Hannah, who was three at the time, walked in. She demanded to play with Sassy; I told her no way, it's my present. She told me to shut up; I told her to make me. Childish, immature stuff like that. Long story short, she practically tackled me. That's the thing about Hannah and me; I might be the older one, but I'm more of a nerd. Hannah is a lot stronger than me and always has been, even at three years of age. We tussled, rolling around on the floor slapping, biting, punching, whatever we could do that hurt. Finally, our parents, who had been preoccupied with cleaning up another little boy's accident on the carpet, broke up the dogfight. It was only then that I noticed Sassy was just lying there on the floor, limp like a noodle. I prodded at her but she didn't move. I realized we had rolled over Sassy during the fight. Tiny little kitten that she was, our combined weight had crushed her to death. I lifted her paw. No response. I poked her in the face. No response. I listened for her little heartbeat or a breath, and there was none. On my sixth birthday, I cried myself to sleep, and when I dreamed I dreamed of a cat ten times the size of our house stepping on it with one paw by accident, and killing us all.
As traumatizing as my sixth birthday might have been, as miserable as I might have been on my first day of school, everything from my childhood pales in comparison to the one thing that stands out most prominently in my mind even now, sixteen years later. It was July 6, 1984. Two days after the Fourth of July barbecue, and my parents were still cleaning up. My dad was scrubbing clean the grill, my mom was cleaning the dishes, both of them working hard while my sister and I were playing outside. At this time, I was eight, and my sister was five. Although we never really became friends, sometimes we got along and sometimes we hated each other. I'm sure that if you have brothers or sisters, you know what that's like. Anyway, so this day happened to be one of those days that we liked each other, like a brother and a sister should. We were playing dodgeball with a few kids down the street, and as usual my sister was winning. In this case, that meant I was winning too since I was on her team. Suddenly, our mom called us in to the house, to do our chores for the day(which had gone undone). Muttering rebelliously, we said goodbye to our neighbors and walked inside. Once there, we got an earful from our mother about hard work and responsibility, blah blah blah. We got into an argument with her, some stupid reason, this, that, excuses, excuses. It got a bit heated, to say the least. It was just then that I heard a loud BOOM! of earsplitting volume, and I dropped to the ground on my knees, clutching my ears in my hands. I curled up into a ball on the ground as the noise continued, louder and louder, lower and lower of pitch, until finally I was certain my head would explode. Hannah and Mom just stared at me, disbelief, shock, and concern crossing on their faces. Mom knelt and said something to me; I could not understand a word of it. I could not hear a thing other than the earth shattering sound ringing through my ears. I screamed, and Mom stepped back, taken aback, almost fearful. Dad ran in, and this time I could read his lips; 'What's wrong?' he asked Mom, and she replied 'I don't know.' I yelled, tried to warn them. I knew something awful was coming, something horrible, something from the deepest pits of hell but they wouldn't listen. Why couldn't they hear this noise as well? Why wouldn't they listen to me? Why wouldn't they take my warning? Hannah finally freaked out and ran away, her little legs taking her away as fast as possible. Dad ran after her, ignoring me. Hannah ran out the front door, tailed by Dad. As the noise, if possible, got even louder, I saw a man walk into the living room. He was tall, with a thick bushy black beard, unruly dark hair, and darting eyes that I would swear were red. He wore a suit of black armor. As he approached slowly, I could hear the noise getting louder and louder, lower and lower, and I shook with fear as I saw him come. I held my mom's hand with a death grip, till both our knuckles were white. She knelt next to me, oblivious of impending doom behind her. I literally quaked with fear and finally she looked behind. Her eyes widened fearfully and I knew, finally, that I had gotten the message across to her. I let go of her hand, certain that now one of the adults knew of the matter, it would be taken care of or would simply disappear. But it was not to be. I saw the "dark knight" man walk slowly to our kitchen and take the butcher knife out of the knife rack, and slowly walk towards Mom and me. Mom stood and, holding my hand, started to run away from the black knight. But the black knight blocked her, his immense bulk stopping her cold. As if it was happening in slow motion, he drew back the butcher knife and stabbed it into her once. Her eyes popped open with pain, and I saw her mouth move in a scream. I saw the black knight pull out the knife, his hand shaking almost as if he was scared too, then stabbed her again. And again. And again. Blood spurted onto all three of us, completely covering me, and him, until he was more of a red knight than black. I just stood there, frozen in place like a statue, and unable to tear my eyes away and run. And honestly, as I watched my mother being brutally murdered right before my eyes, I didn't want to. I didn't think of anything. I was simply in shock, unable to do anything or even think. All I could do was watch. Watch as the black knight turned away from my mom, drawing out the butcher knife for the final time. I watched as she slumped to the floor, dead, and he began to approach me, one foot at a time. His heavy metal boots clacked with a solid sound even on the carpet. Step. Step. Step. I watched mesmerized as he approached, blood dripping from his knife. Drip. Drip. Drip. Once he got close to me, he stopped. I could only watch, mesmerized, as he drew back the knife to kill me as he had done my mother. Then, he just faded away, the blood-covered butcher's knife falling from his ethereal hands with a THUD. It was only then that I was able to move, and think. Overwhelmed, I crawled over to my mom's dead body on all fours and buried my head in the carpet next to her, sobbing uncontrollably. When my dad returned, Hannah in tow, they found me asleep on the floor, lying next to my mom's corpse, a blood-covered butcher's knife a few feet away.

At first, the police accused my dad of the crime, but Hannah was able to get him off the hook with her testimony. Then they attacked Hannah, but my dad's testimony proved her innocence. That only left me. The police attacked me relentlessly; they thought I was guilty as sin. And after hearing them say I killed my mom, over and over and over, that they had evidence against me, that I had to have done it, I believed them. I did. I bought into their story. I thought that the black knight was a figment of my imagination, that I had killed my own mom. I was sentenced to indefinite time in a mental institution(until such time as I was deemed fit to reenter society as a "normal person&quot. So, with nothing else to do, I went to that mental health institution. What can I say? I was confused, I was scared, I had just seen my mom murdered, and there was nothing else I could do except believe what the policemen told me, and do what I was told.
So I did.
For fifteen years, they conducted experiments on me, for fifteen years I was isolated, treated like a freak, for fifteen years I was kept in a straitjacket while everyone else was graduating from high school, getting jobs, falling in love. For those fifteen unbearable years I was punished for something I did not do, punished for something that at this point even I was convinced I'd done. My minimum sentence was fifteen years, and I was kept in an insane asylum for those fifteen years. None of the psychiatrists, psychologists, neurologists, pharmacists, therapists, or wardens could find anything wrong with me no matter how they tried, so after fifteen years I was released back into "normal" society. No visitors had been allowed where I had been imprisoned, so I had not had contact with anyone else for fifteen years. It took me a while, but I finally tracked down my little sister Hannah's phone number and gave her a call. She wasn't so little anymore. At the time, I'd been twenty-three, and she was twenty. She was in residency for a position as a registered nurse, and she barely remembered me, but Hannah had grown a lot since I'd last seen her. She said that no matter what has happened, she believes I'm innocent, and always will, and that I'm welcome to stay with her. That I would always be her big brother. After I hung up, I just stood for a moment, overwhelmed with emotions of happiness, worry, and grief. To be honest with you, that one phone call with my little sister after I was released from the mental institution is one of the only good things that I will carry with me to the grave. I will remember it forever.

I moved in with Hannah and have lived there for a year, writing these, my memoirs. I suppose that's not the end of my story, though. Last night, I had a dream. It was about the Black Knight that had killed my mom. This time though, I saw him coming after me and Hannah. He stabbed her with a butcher knife just like my mom...then he slashed my throat.
Then I woke up.

I didn't tell Hannah about my dream, I just went to my job. It was awful, just as a cashier at the local greasy fast food joint, but I was a 24-year-old man with a second-grade education. It was the best I could get. I worked, and worked, and throughout the day I didn't forget one second about my dream. The moment that my boss let me go(it should be noted my boss is approximately half my age) I ran to the nearest self defense store. I bought myself a set of full body armor with the money I had stored up, my life savings, and headed home. I wasn't going to take any chances.

I have been awake for the last forty-eight hours, on the lookout for the Black Knight. I am leaning on my new shotgun, sitting awake, constantly alert. I jump at the slightest noise, aim at the slightest movement, and have been shaking with fear of the Black Knight.
"Ethan, you need to stop worrying," Hannah pleaded with me. "Please? You're scaring me."
"Hannah, the Black Knight is coming," I whispered. "I know it."
"Please, Ethan?" Hannah begged. I was exhausted and my nerves were shot.
"Hannah, would you just-" I began to snap, but the noise began again. The noise I had heard when my mother had died. I dropped to the ground on all fours, clutching my ears. Slowly, as if in a trance, I started to shake. The Black Knight had come. He was here. I could see him. He began to approach. I was not as debilitated as I once was, but certainly my mental prowess had been limited. Fighting my way with every step, I slowly stood, and grabbed the butcher knife myself. So far so good, now at least that part of my dream could not come true. Then, I finally managed to stab the Black Knight. Over, and over, and over again. I started to laugh maniacally as I did so, finally the police would have their proof that I was innocent, finally I had my revenge. Hatred, fear, all those things that I had harnessed for sixteen long years I stabbed into the Black Knight. Finally, I looked down at a bloody mass that had once been my sister. Then, slowly, realizing what I had done once more, I walked into the bathroom and gazed into the mirror. A mental health institution isn't very strict on hygiene, and I was surprised to see that during my absence I had grown a very thick unruly beard. In addition, my hair had grown out as well, all thick and ugly. I was wearing black bulletproof body armor.
Slowly, I took the knife covered with my little sister's blood, and I drew it across my neck. The Black Knight's head rolled to the floor, his deadened eyes staring at nothingness.
But at least that damnable noise had stopped.

25wes25
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Lol nice i got the points. Poor kitty my cats next to me when i read it.

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Very good story, Hyper. Really enjoyed it.

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Just one thing... The beginning and the end don't match.

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I might give this one a go. I had a suspense-thriller about the Slender Man in my old spanish notebook, I should dig that up and post it...

...anyway, I'm pretty stuck on ideas. Any suggestions? I might go for a long walk in the forest this weekend, so that should give me some influence.

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I might give this one a go. I had a suspense-thriller about the Slender Man in my old spanish notebook, I should dig that up and post it...
...anyway, I'm pretty stuck on ideas. Any suggestions? I might go for a long walk in the forest this weekend, so that should give me some influence.


Slender Man? I'd really like to read that. Taking walks in always gives me ideas, so I'd give it a go.

And remember... He is always watching.
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Just one thing... The beginning and the end don't match.

How so? =(
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