ForumsArt, Music, and Writing. . . and Alt Returns, Pen in Hand, With Another New Writing Thread

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thisisnotanalt
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Farmer

I haven't been a major part of the writing community here in a while, and I kinda liked being a major part of the writing community here. So, I'm making another thread. Imma start with a pedantic and verbose poem I wrote about an odd tree in my front yard.

Half-green phantasm, still corporeal -

Snagged on transition for time immemorial.

Uroboric life, it's stuck on the stomach,

Lack of senescence rules, it sits dictatorial.



It stands through summer, winter and fall -

The leaves hold on, vicious winds withal.

But how can the zombie tree survive,

if nature gives no help at all?



Suppose it's luck, agonizingly poetic -

Figure it's love, a deceiving aesthetic.

But can love for life keep it alive forever,

as it stands against nature, unsympathetic?

Come to think of it, a lot of the AG writing youngsters were never exposed to a lot of my work. Hrm, how times have changed *rubs achey back with trusty cane*

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MoonFairy
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Shepherd

I think I came to Armor Games when you stopped writing. Because I haven't seen you write. Let's just add you to the list of Amazing Poets...

I anticipate your story. So hurry it up.

thisisnotanalt
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Yes, I think you did . . . I was one of the main poets here along with Fab for a while, and we had a lot of epic battles in the poetry contest. A good deal of my work - the better stuff and the really, really terrible stuff - is on my dA account.

Yes, working on the story. I'm still thinking on it, so it'll be up in a day or so.

1337Player
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I haven't ever seen you write Alt. Well that because mostly I haven't see you around, but still! Or it could be the fact that I'm a new member.

Well, I like your writings and I hope you make more. And I'll be giving some real constructive criticism next time. Or maybe even some praise.

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