Prologue There once was a man who lived in a village called 'Dark Springs". On one sunny day in mid summer, he was spying the ground for a special rock he wanted. While he was looking around, he saw a little rusty shack in the distance. He walked all the way there and knocked on the loosely hinged door. On the other side he heard a screech. Then the door opened and he saw a bearded old man who looked like a wizard. He was wearing a wizard shaped hat and he had a bright blue staff. The man asked the old man if he was a wizard and the old man replyed yes. Then the wizard asked the man what his only wish was. The man replyed if I could go a day back in time, that would be very nice and his only wish. The wizard gave him the power to go back in time. The wizard let him leave of only one consent. The wizard said you should not tell anyone you can go back in time. The man agreed. Then he gave his thanks and left for his cozy home. Chapter I Coming Soon!
Well, don't just state what happened so... shortly. Give it a little more detail. I will be watching how it develops, but I will be paying more attention to how your writing skill overall improves.
