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Faunbard
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Hey this is Faunbard and im doing a rock/metel songwriting contest. If you were in my last one, quit that and come to this because i wasnt that all specific.
RULES
no vulger or inappropiate lyrics
Please do not have it be super long
include tital and username
Deadline- Dec 25
looking for how catchy it is, if it rymes right and if it has a good begining, chorus and end
ROCK ON!
Optional- include link to a video that shows your song so i know what it sounds like
Optional- include subgenre. examp- soft rck, metalic, ect.

i think thats all so ill leave it to you guys!

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MoonFairy
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Shepherd

metel

Metal
vulger

Vulgar
tital

Title
begining

Beginning
Just sayin.
I could make a rock song about how important spelling is. Maybe some would learn? Or at least get Firefox or Google Chrome. They spell check.
wolf1991
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Insomniac

Do, do, do do do, do, do, do, do...

It's 4am, and I'm staring at the ceiling again
Drifting somewhere in between realities
Another day, another wasteful night
As curtain thin walls drown the noise
This is what they seem to call paradise
But from where I lie I see plastered
Faces in my window. Faces in my window.

And can't you see that I'm not sleeping?
I'm somewhere caught between
What you told me, and how I answered
Don't sit there and lie to me...
'Cause I'm no longer sleeping.

Dawn is coming over the horizon
And here I am wide awake, again.
Today is, just like any other,
Where my bloodshot eyes are unfocused
On that old plywood floor.
And I hear the sounds of those plastered faces
Knocking at my door!

And can't you see that I'm not sleeping?
I'm somewhere caught between
What you told me, and how I answered
Don't sit there and lie to me...
'Cause I'm no longer sleeping.

I'm no longer sleeping, I'm not longer sleeping
I'm no longer sleeping, no longer sleeping

And can't you see that I'm not sleeping?
I'm somewhere caught between
What you told me, and how I answered
Don't sit there and lie to me...
'Cause I'm no longer sleeping.

Don't sit there and lie to me
I can hear those plastered faces whisper,
In the sound of your voice
I'm no longer sleeping...

Faunbard
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could make a rock song about how important spelling is. Maybe some would learn? Or at least get Firefox or Google Chrome. They spell check.


Are you going to create a song or not? if not then please do not post again
wolf1991
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Are you going to create a song or not? if not then please do not post again


easy there pal she's just joking with you, though the spell check may be useful.
Faunbard
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sorry!
Im kinda mad tonight. my bro pranked me and it sucked

WesBond
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A song in the key of Harmonic A minor

The friend of a friend died
And it gives me chills
To know that Iâve lied
Could I be the next killed
Wrapped in a white sheet
Fresh from the morgue
Was she ever beat
Did she hear enough chords
What makes a life
And what made hers
The grass is greener on the other side
But leaving still hurts
The best feeling of all
Is being able to reminisce
But it still hurts when we fall
Still hard not to miss
Those that we love
When theyâve been taken away
All just because
Our âGodâ had his way

Iâm not asking why
Just wondering how
He chose who died
Then and who dies now
My friendâs become cold
âCause of what sheâs been through
Her friend wasnât old
Enough to die you
I bet you know what itâs like
To wanna die
âCause you know that you might
But youâre still here and so am I
I donât even know
How she bit the dust
Not well I guess so
Iâll never ask if I must
It just doesnât seem fair
That they go and we stay
Each wishing we were there
To with the other remain

To with the other remain!
All just because
Our âGodâ had his way

drakwolf420x
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rock\\metel huh u people should listen to the beastie boys ^^ thay rock

Faunbard
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they do- along with the beatles. wanna join the contest?

Faunbard
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ok i need more people

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