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Secretmapper
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I'm planning to add music into it. Please review, do I need to put something else into it?

I used newgrounds' play button.

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Secretmapper
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Oh, silly me, forgot to put the link! HERE!

puppyguy1
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Very nice, i must say!

Nice and smooth, but not too short!

Make more! I like Soap Hero :P

TheLastGamer
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Good job i like it

jdoggparty
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I like it, good use of free transform.

ug5151
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Make more! This is very good. It is better than me.

manny6574
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It's good, but I suggest you start with stickmen, like jdogg. He started with pivot, now he can make awesome anims in flash.

KingLemon
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Good animation, i'm curious as to what you used.
But when he is flying through the air, i suggest you add something in the background, clouds, birds, anything, to show that he is flying.

Reton8
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Pretty good. When the soap bar is flying thorough the air there should be some line running behind him or a slight blur to give the illusion of movement. Other than that great stuff.

MrGame10
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I thought he was a marshmallow

ProfessorOak
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I though tit was an egg, then it said soap hero D:.


Same. :c

Anyways, really great first animation, I usually epically fail my first try at... well at anything. Keep on practicing!
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