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DesertHyena
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Before I post anything I need to know, is copyright respected in this forum?

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DesertHyena
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Ok, I've never tried this before, so here it is, my first song ever, The Lame Song! 2010 copyright all rights reserved:

The Lame Song! by Jacobus Aubuchon

(Intro)
Lame, Lame, Lame
Lame, Lame, Lame

I love to rock, but don't know how to sing
It's not really a very easy thing
You got to learn how to rhyme the words
And if you don't then it sounds just like Merde
Just play your guitar and sing this song
Listen to it record all day long
And if you're lucky then you might find
That record deal is not far behind

(Instrumental Break)

Trying to learn how to make good music
Writing lyrics that aren't just acoustic
A song that rocks, a song that rolls
A song that make you say "way to go"
I wish I really knew just what it takes
So that I don't just make a bunch of mistakes
But if you've got talent, and if you've got game
You're well on your way to fortune and fame

(Guitar Solo, followed by Bass/Drum Solo)

This song just sucks, and this I know
Man, I have fun just trying to bowl
Writing good lyrics is hard to do
With all the good stuff, it's nothing new
You'll probably hate me for being dumb
But that's ok, I feel pretty numb
What is the meaning, what am I saying
Nothing really, but I keep on playing
It's the end of the song, now here it comes
Well you can tell, this thing is finally done!

(Outro)

That Was Lame, That Was Lame, That Was Totally LAAAAAAAAAME!

DesertHyena
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Dang it, last try with this stupid thing:

The Lame Song! by DesertHyena

(Intro)

Lame, Lame, Lame
Lame, Lame, Lame
I love to rock, but don't know how to sing
It's not really a very easy thing
You got to learn how to rhyme the words
And if you don't then it sounds just like Merde
Just play your guitar and sing this song
Listen to it record all day long
And if you're lucky then you might find
That record deal is not far behind

(Instrumental Break)

Trying to learn how to make good music
Writing lyrics that aren't just acoustic
A song that rocks, a song that rolls
A song that make you say "way to go"
I wish I really knew just what it takes
So that I don't just make a bunch of mistakes
But if you've got talent, and if you've got game
You're well on your way to fortune and fame

(Guitar Solo, followed by Bass/Drum Solo)

This song just sucks, and this I know
Man, I have fun just trying to bowl
Writing good lyrics is hard to do
With all the good stuff, it's nothing new
You'll probably hate me for being dumb
But that's ok, I feel pretty numb
What is the meaning, what am I saying
Nothing really, but I keep on playing
It's the end of the song, now here it comes
Well you can tell, this thing is finally done!

(Outro)

That Was Lame, That Was Lame, That Was Totally LAAAAAAAAAME!

urbanwolf232
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i think if you have a good voice you could make quite a lot of money by selling it!

HolyDiver329
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nice lyrics. what kind of music would this be supported with?

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