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wideloadbo10
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I know I am desperate
But do not look down upon me
I have much power
And yet no one will ever know

You might be an exception
You might already know
And yet you still hate me
For why I do not know

Please leave me now
I am to be alone
I do not understand
You must go home

I'll give you time to sort this out
Even though it's all my doing
I am a mess
Yes I do know

The World in your hands
Yet you do not know
I give you my power
As I fade away

Into the darkness
I slip away
I will see you
On another day

Come to me now
I will tell you
You will know all
And you will be a great soul

You are me
It is my time to go
You have evil magic
But you will grow



Anybody like it or not? Anyone have your own ideas? Tell me. This was my first time doing poetry.

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kervile
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thank you...ill have to remember that...i think i may make my own thread for my poems...may

jacksonghuntington
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Well, i like humor poems. i like urs but id do more something like

I like hair
Bears have hair
Bears must behave
Or they will be shaved
Then they will have no hair.
I don't like no hair.

Hehehe

Efan
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Or they will be shaved

How about: 'or they'll get a shave? It fits in better.
And do you have to end most lines with hair?
I don't like no hair.

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Bears must behave

But bears are wild. Aren't they?
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