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jacksonghuntington
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Ok guys for those of u who dont know, a lymric is a poem that involves rhyming. Its format is like this...

Line
Line that's last word rhymes with the first line's last word
Line
Line that's last word rhymes with the 3rd line's last word
line that's last word rhymes with the 1st and 2nd line's last word

anyways, my idea is that we make a lymric that people add to. once one is done, a person adds another line that kind of makes some sort of story that follows the first stanza. Ill make the first line....

There once was a man named lee.

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urbanwolf232
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yeah well i suck at writing poetry,so i dont cear

DeadlyVelociraptor
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It's spelled care

Anyway I am too, a really bad poet.

Can anyone post another line or is this thread getting locked?

iMogwai
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After that, he took imog to his lair
He politely sat Imog on a red chair
He summoned a bear

And a hat it could wear

I don't pronounce bear close enough to lair to consider it invalid. And I don't think hair rhymes with bear, so I do consider that line invalid. Sorry Urban.

And Deadly, no need to be so rude.
DeadlyVelociraptor
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There once was a man named Lee
he fell off an apple tree
but when he awoke
He knew something was broke,
Because his head was under his knee

The next day he went to the beach
And under his chin was a leech
It sucked all the blood
and he tripped in the mud
And the leech and him got a bruise each

His head hurt a lot the next day
He wondered if the leech was okay
So when it said yes
It relieved his stress.
But he knew by his pain that his wallet would pay

And so he was hitting the hay
Ready to sleep the day away
But as he laid down
He started to drown
Since he forgot he was still at the bay

He then rented a red sail-boat
But, it had a small hole and didn't quite float.
He then met Poseidon
and the dolphin he rode on
now suddenly, he's with a goat.

This goat was eating a muffin
Interest and fun were nothin'
The man stole it's food
He then met a dude
Who spends his days in a coffin

the dude said his name was Imog
He threw a bomb that created smog
It ruined every city
The devil said what a pity.
Because he wanted to feed them to his dog

After that, he took imog to his lair
He politely sat Imog on a red chair
He summoned a bear
And a hat it could wear
cause without head-covering it wouldn't be fair

Why so serious?

jk, but really I don't think I was cruel or rude...

urbanwolf232
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please just say the last few peaces of the limerick because otherwise its just spam! and no prob imogwai i was board so i just wrote something random

urbanwolf232
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After that, he took imog to his lair
He politely sat Imog on a red chair
He summoned a bear
And a hat it could wear
cause without head-covering it wouldn't be fair

then he sent him on a mission

Kevin4762
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These are all really good. I like them.

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