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rockynick
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once a leaf as light as a knight fell on me.once I jumped up on one knee

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Efan
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Are you going to continue this? Or do I call someone to lock this?

DeadlyVelociraptor
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Can I continue it?

Once a leaf as light as a knight
fell on me.
I jumped up, up in the air
on one knee
I did not know how it is
so amazingly heavy
Yet somehow it was still a leaf
One special extremely
Maybe it was a stone in disguise
maybe even an anvil
Never will I be sure again
while the leaf's still falling.

rockynick
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Thank you for carrying on the poem

rockynick
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I've got a bit more for the poem here it is once a car travelled very far.

iMogwai
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Once a car travelled very far.
The man driving sought to become a star.
He wrote a poem, and he then wrote a song,
Neither of which was very long.
Because there was something he never understood.
They need to be longer to be any good.

Take the hint.

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