This is my collection of songs, hymns, poams, artwork and writings i have made. Many of you have helped edit my work, and thumbs up to you. Also when i post you guys can help revise it too. ill start off with a poam. I hope you like it. sry bout grammer
The Road Many people journey the road Paving their own trail Many people carry a load Through sun fog and hail When finally they come to the crossroads And select a new route to take Many people travel the road Full of choices to make
I did enjoy that last one, but you can use commas, it helps. Like this.
Many people journey the road, Paving their own trail. Many people carry a load, Through sun, fog, and hail. When finally they come to the crossroads, And select a new route to take. Many people travel the road, Full of choices to make.
Makes it easier to read
For Today is the Day, It was a pleasant read, but capitalize your I's, okay? I liked the fact that you rhymed it, I'm a sucker for rhyme, but it seems forced.... Work on the rhythm of it all, and edit before you post
thanks, i do need to work on editing. someone could punch me in the face and scream a word out to me and i still wouldnt spell it right. Im going to get a prolauge in soon to a short story or novella im composing so stay tuned.
