Hey there, My name is Ashley, I grew up as an orphan in a small town. My parents died when I was 3 in a car crash, but I never knew what really happened. Iâm currently living with the Jacksonâs, they are just a married couple, Mary and Brian, aged 54 and 37. I feel like I have a connection with these two people ever since I met them, but I donât know why because weâre not related.
"Ash, get up for school, youâre gonna miss the bus!" Mary called. Ashley groaned, and put the pillow over her head, she hadn't got any sleep last night, it was another one of those dreams about her parents. Every night the dream seemed to become more vivid. Again, Mary shrieked, "Ashley!" Ashley then mumbled, "Fine, one minute." Ashley fell back to sleep, but quickly back woke up when she saw a man diving towards her face with a knife in hand. Mary barged up the stairs, opened Ashley's door, and walked in, she was just about to scream out, when Ashley said, "I'm up". "Okay, get dressed quickly! I have to go to work now, I left a slice of toast on the table, hurry up now, you don't want to miss the bus" Ashley smiled, "Okay, Mary." Mary rushed down the stairs, grabbed her briefcase and walked out the door.
Hey there, My name is Ashley, I grew up as an orphan in a small town. My parents died when I was 3 in a car crash, but I never knew what really happened. I'm currently living with the Jackson's, they are just a married couple, Mary and Brian, aged 54 and 37. I feel like I have a connection with these two people ever since I met them, but I don't know why because weâre not related.
"Ash, get up for school, you're gonna miss the bus!" Mary called. Ashley groaned, and put the pillow over her head, she hadn't got any sleep last night, it was another one of those dreams about her parents. Every night the dream seemed to become more vivid. Again, Mary shrieked, "Ashley!" Ashley then mumbled, "Fine, one minute." Ashley fell back to sleep, but quickly back woke up when she saw a man diving towards her face with a knife in hand. Mary barged up the stairs, opened Ashley's door, and walked in, she was just about to scream out, when Ashley said, "I'm up". "Okay, get dressed quickly! I have to go to work now, I left a slice of toast on the table, hurry up now, you don't want to miss the bus" Ashley smiled, "Okay, Mary." Mary rushed down the stairs, grabbed her briefcase and walked out the door.
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Took out the symbols forgot about them with the apostrophes, okay.
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I personally enjoy literary texts that let your imagination flow. to much detail and it is boring to me, not enough and it can be confusing. Describe things like the weather or an object, the people should be allowed to be filled in with the reader's thoughts, like maybe i want to imaging Ashley as a smokin' hot chic or a nerd. Entertain one's mind.
