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GhostOfHorror
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Well, seeming as most people have one of these, guess I'll give it a shot.

Bleeding face
Scar left in its place
Still feeling the
Pain.

Scar covered by skin tissue
Physically okay
But mentally
Disturbed.

A wound might perhaps disappear
Visibly no longer there
In your mind, pain still
Lingering.

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GhostOfHorror
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Upcoming is a Haiku.

Spring:
Dew upon the grass
The vivid colors lighting
the day, it's spring time.

Maverick4
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The enjabment is a little akward in your Haiku, other than that, its not too bad. Keep it up.

GhostOfHorror
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In a useless attempt to revive this topic

My mistake:
Watching your last breath
Really should've done something
So, you'd breathe again.

SupaLegit
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Ghost, since I know what's going on, it really touches me man.

My Mistake is so beautiful to our conversation... Just so saddening to the others... Keep up the good work bro, and I'm here for you, don't you forget that!

master565
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You're Haiku's are great and just asking, is Ghostofmatrix allowed to post here too?

rokolin
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i've got a poem:

Roses are red
violets are blue
in soviet russia
poems write you.

TheGr8est
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ok this is the first poem im gonna try to make.

confidence fading,
the worlds growing dark,
everyones hating,
armageddons mark,

there is no hope,
no joy or pride,
not one can cope,
for everyone has died.

well what do you think

(plz tell me how i did on my profile cuz i dont think im gonna look at this again)

SupaLegit
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Why are you guys posting your poems of Horror's thread?

If you want, start your own poetry threads...

gocto
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I think this threades are Horror. And I think, what for the new poems, new histories need to do new thread.

XVERB
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i liked the haiku, the other one was just sketchy

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