Forums → Art, Music, and Writing → Silvermoon decides to write.(Or attempts to.)

I guess since so many people decided to make a place to post their brain goop, I'm joining in. I probably won't post much poetry, but expect... stuff.
Here's something I'm writing from scratch.(A poem, just because they're easy.)
I walked to the shore
And I saw your body
Drenched in water and gore
I scream and shout
Till my throat is sore
But I can't bring you back
I know that for sure.

I blow out the candle.
It darkens.
Fear.
A monster pops out.
He eats them all.
Death.
I run, I flee.
But can't escape.
Doubt.
And when I scream, it only wastes breath.
The monster's teeth are bared but suddenly...
Hope.

And in honor of pie day...
I open the pie shop, filled with aroma.
Gather my choices.
And when I buy my pastry, and begin to chew.
I start to hear voices.
Saying
"Don't eat me, I'm too young to die!
AAAAAAAAAAAAH!"
I stare at the pie.
For the longest time....








And then I ate it, cause it was too hard to resist.

Those were my uninspired pieces. Next time I probably will make more of a story and less of a poem.