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LiLRick
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Chapter 2


It was getting pretty noisy as The Bowling Pin prepared for their monthly pro-league tournament. Jason was having a good time with Annie, his Fiance'. They had just met at this same bowling alley no more thn eight months ago. It was another classic story of love at first sight.
Things were kind of casual at first as neither wanted to appear easy. But raelly, it so obvious that they were the only ones who didn't notice. They were just there to watch and hang out with their friends just like their doing tonight.
They would have married sooner were it not for Jason's personal troubles. His father had been sick for a little while now and although he wasn't very sick, Jason worried every time his 62 year old dad sneezed. And he had suspicions that his unannounced girlfriend was cheating on him.
Wednesdays would later become one of Jason's most hated days of the week instead of his most loved.
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DeadlyVelociraptor
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You post all the chapters in one thread, not a chapter for each thread...

Plus, try to make the chapters longer...

Aaaaaaaaaaaand, please go look a couple pages before to see the short story contest, where I have a guide on how to make a good story.

Thank you.

LiLRick
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Thank you very much for the advise.

ThomasMalcum
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interesting

LiLRick
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Thanks for the compliment. The first chapter was an in medeus res. Latin for in the middel of things. Basically, this is the actual beggining of the story.

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