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Seems like I stopped around page 32. I will pick up from there! Mwaha! But at a later time. I have to go for a bit now, I'll be baaaaaaaaaaack! I'll make a reminder for myself on my about....

You don't have to if you're too busy, Moon.

I said I was going to change up the rhyme scheme, right? And according to someone *coughdragoncough* my poetry lately has all been sounding the same.

TO TEH GOOGLEZ. *looks up poem types*

Here is an Ode to Cenere. Or rather two Odes, because I wanted to do a Terza Rima, but it may not turn out as well as the other.

Cenere: The modly mod

Cenere is a godly modly mod
He has art and words to spare.
His drawings I do applaud.

I must admit, I was first scared;
I saw him ban the blight.
n00bs caught in his snare.

I saw his name across the site
Over my every scrolling screens,
It was really quite a sight.

I would often dread the scene
Being banned by Cen's ammo.
He just seemed so very mean.

Of course now I know
That he's actually quite nice.
I enjoy his drawings so.

In conclusion I'd like to say to Cen
That on him for art I do depend.

NEXT ONE: FREE VEEEERSEEE

You turn blank pages
Into movement
Where there was nothing,
Dappled strokes and
Delicate lines
Curve themselves into shapes.

I was going to write another stanza, but I got lazy. :b

That poem.... At the top.... Was amazing......until the end.... But that much is obvious.

HOLY FLYING FISH the second poem on this page was breathtaking!!!!! My gods, tacky you have bumped yourself onto the levels of fallen and parsat and wolf!

That reaper looks pretty awesome, actually. Really cool i like how the scythe is humungo and she is like a toothpick.

Ahhhh the wolf drawing was great.
Oh and you do realize I'm commenting as if this was still on page 33, right?
Right now this is page... 36.

I really like the poem here and your haiku compile.
It's really fantastic, the way you write and draw, tacky. I'm seriously jelly, and for me to be seriously jelly it takes a whole heck of a lot.
You have over 10000 views, right? Right.
Your stuff is amazing. The way you describe scenes.... It's breathtaking. I really hope you never stop writing.
Your drawings and stuff are really awesome, too. I'm awaiting to see what you have planned for me, you know :P

Anyways. On to page 37!

By the way, you have me feeding off of this new short story of yours.
You fire and ice poem, that was simply perfect. I didn't find a fault within it, it was awesome. I'm caught up now, and here is a notification that I will be adding your thread to my changes in my about.

Firstly I'd like to say THANKS for going through all of my crap poetry and complimenting it.
Secondly I'd like to THANKS again because that is quite a feat.
Thirdly I'll be heading off you your thread now. :b
Fourthly I'm back from NYC and thus we can work on our story.

FLP stuff.

I wish I could see
All the dawns
All the dusks.
I wish I could see
The choking
red rust.
But as long
I'm afraid
To open my eyes,
I'll never
Be able to
Reach for the skies
For how can you
reach
If you can't see?
How can you
ever
Never be free?
I'm bound by
My fears,
Right to the ground,
Soon I'll cover
My ears,
Too afraid to hear sound.
Then I'll be nothing
I can't smile
Can't heal.
Soon it'll be over
I already
Can't feel.

You nailed the flow on this one! This has got to be your best flowing one yet.

If you can't see?
How can you
ever
Never be free?

Thanks, Paarfam.

More FLP. I have no life.

Why do I feel this way?
My face is growing warm
When I thought I was
as cold as an icy storm.

My heart is beating loud
When I know I felt it die
Spluttering to a stop.
A heavy weight inside.

My words are odd and soft,
Usually biting and cross,
Biting like a needle.
What happened to my voice?

Perhaps it's a poison
I knew you were my bane.
But then again
How do you make me feel so sane?

badness.

Tacky, ish yooh archiving your stuffs too?! FINALLY I'M NOT THE ONLY INSANE ONE!

Hey, it was still a good idea MoonFairy.

*shakes head*

Knight, you used mah full name o:
And it was, but my god I think I scared whatever audience I had away!

Tacky, ish yooh archiving your stuffs too?! FINALLY I'M NOT THE ONLY INSANE ONE!

Hey, it was still a good idea MoonFairy.

*shakes head*

Knight, you used mah full name o:
And it was, but my god I think I scared whatever audience I had away!

Little rhyme. :b
Sketch later if I can sneak downstairs.

Nothing but a robot girl,
Empty at the eyes.
Atop my head are pretty curls,
You'll never see the lies.

I'll smile and laugh, even agree
With all your insults at me,
Though you can never, ever see
That my mind's still safely free.

You want a maid robot?
You wish is my command,
A cool drink would hit the spot,
I'll give all you demand.

I've tried to escape this heavy mask
But you always make me retreat.
I fail all your hopeless tasks...
My ignorance is quite a feat.

I'm a useless, stupid child,
Of course what you say is true,
You say your words are rightly mild
And soon I believe it too.

It's safer to hide inside;
Your robot girl I'll be,
But soon it will be my time
And I will rescue me.