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Innocence
Trying to prove your innocence
Pleading with the smirking judge
One that holds a grudge against you
So she'll be biased, nothing you can do.

Verbally defending yourself
Tear trickling down your face
You weren't the one who pulled the trigger
To bring up this case, but the judge s******s.

The judge bangs her gavel with a loud thud
That echoes throughout the room
You demand for your innocence
But the judges verdict, fills you with gloom.

You're stuck in a small jail cell
Not much space for you to move
When you get out; time will tell
Hopefully, your innocence is proved.

The word that is censored is sn!ggers.

A broken picture
A broken picture smashed on the floor
Shattering the memories which we've known
Glass spread out across the empty room
The love of life in our faces; can't be shown.

All the memories already beginning to fade
We look at what once was a great moment
A moment, which will never be remade
We pick up the pieces of glass.

The glass pierces our hands deeply
Blood spills out over the picture
The memory now gone into crimson red
That one memory is now as good as dead.

Another poem with a theme from the 50 Theme Poetry.

I like those poems. You should write more poems. I like funny poems, like this:
I Forgot

As I woke up in the morning,
I had to look for homework,
"what was I looking for?",
As I rummaged through my things.

I looked in my room,
I looked in the living room,
and as the time slipped away to eight,
I remembered that I didn't forget anything.

I'm not sure how I can put anything humorous into a poem.
Thanks for the feedback, though.

My sandwich
Sandwiches are yummy
The flavors of toppings
The texture of bread
Melts in your mouth.
Gulping down the sandwich
Fulfilling the hunger.

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Some feedback would be appreciated.

Useless random bump.

Sleep!
Sleeping through the night
Easing myself from life's stress
Lying here, resting.