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ramzaman

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Posted April 5, '11 11:35pm UTC

hope you like it(:
no hurtful comments please

DEATH!
By: Ramzaman

[Verse 1]
DEATH!
Thats all there ever is
Thats all there ever will be
The only sure thing in life is death
So just wait
Just wait and youll see everything fade away
And then there will be DEATH

[Chorus 1]
But i wont give up hope
Ill search for the salvation
I swear ill save all our souls
Please God help us
Help us find away out of this helll

[Verse 2]
ive told you all were better off dead
But how do you feel with a gun to your head
Its all over you fell
ill send you to heaven or ill send you to hell
But no matter what its all in vain
Call me crazy or call me insane
Id say im wise for i saw through these lies
I know were all dead
And we cant change that
Though where we go
Thats allll up to us

[Chorus 2]
But i wont give up hope
Ill search for the salvation
I swear ill save all our souls
Please God help us
Help us find away out of this helll

[Chorus 3]
But i wont give up hope
Ill search for the salvation
I swear ill save all our souls
Please God help us
Help us find away out of this helll

[Chorus 4]
And i wont lose my faith
Ill search for the salvation
I swear ill save all our souls
Please God help us
Help us find away out of this helll

[Outro]
Please God help us
Find away out of this helll

hope you like it(:\r\nno hurtful comments please\r\n\r\n[b]DEATH![/b]\r\n[i]By: Ramzaman[/i] \r\n\r\n\r\n[Verse 1]\r\nDEATH!\r\nThats all there ever is\r\nThats all there ever will be\r\nThe only sure thing in life is death\r\nSo just wait \r\nJust wait and youll see everything fade away \r\nAnd then there will be DEATH\r\n\r\n[Chorus 1] \r\nBut i wont give up hope\r\nIll search for the salvation\r\nI swear ill save all our souls\r\nPlease God help us\r\nHelp us find away out of this helll\r\n\r\n[Verse 2]\r\nive told you all were better off dead\r\nBut how do you feel with a gun to your head\r\nIts all over you fell\r\nill send you to heaven or ill send you to hell\r\nBut no matter what its all in vain\r\nCall me crazy or call me insane\r\nId say im wise for i saw through these lies\r\nI know were all dead\r\nAnd we cant change that\r\nThough where we go\r\nThats allll up to us\r\n\r\n[Chorus 2]\r\nBut i wont give up hope\r\nIll search for the salvation\r\nI swear ill save all our souls\r\nPlease God help us\r\nHelp us find away out of this helll\r\n\r\n[Chorus 3]\r\nBut i wont give up hope\r\nIll search for the salvation\r\nI swear ill save all our souls\r\nPlease God help us\r\nHelp us find away out of this helll\r\n\r\n[Chorus 4]\r\nAnd i wont lose my faith\r\nIll search for the salvation\r\nI swear ill save all our souls\r\nPlease God help us\r\nHelp us find away out of this helll\r\n\r\n[Outro]\r\nPlease God help us\r\nFind away out of this helll

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Nurvana

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Posted April 6, '11 12:48am UTC

What are the keys and junk?

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ramzaman

231 posts

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Posted April 6, '11 1:56am UTC

im not so good at writing the music..i just write poetry and songs and stuff.. i play guitar..but i didnt write anything for it.. makes it more fun..make it sound like whatever you want

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Nurvana

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Posted April 6, '11 3:38am UTC

That's a good answer Ramzaman.

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master565

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Posted April 6, '11 3:40am UTC

Technically it's not a song. A song's just a poem if it doesn't have music.

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Nurvana

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Posted April 6, '11 3:41am UTC

See, Master, posts like that are the reason no one likes you.

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master565

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Posted April 6, '11 3:45am UTC

Well that's pretty offensive and I'm not saying it's bad, because i really like it, I'm just saying when you think about it songs are poems with music.

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Nurvana

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Posted April 6, '11 3:46am UTC

Yeah I know I just say that sometimes; don't take it personally

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master565

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Nomad

Posted April 6, '11 3:48am UTC

Opps, probably shouldn't have reported it than.

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Nurvana

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Posted April 6, '11 3:55am UTC

Well, looks like I'll have to retreat back into seclusion... see you guys in a few years. Great job again Ramzaman.

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ramzaman

231 posts

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Posted April 10, '11 6:11pm UTC

thankk you everyone. and you can calll it a poem or a song, it doesnt matter to me..i write poetry too but in poetry i never repeat verses so i consider this a song.

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nemo12

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Posted April 10, '11 6:18pm UTC

I really like this song. Its dark gritty and overall, a really good song by itself. You have real talent and great potential. Keep on writing poetry and songs.

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DustyLee

216 posts

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Posted April 12, '11 3:53pm UTC

its a very emo song. what kind of music is this?

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SparklingKnight

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Posted April 12, '11 8:01pm UTC

A really good song I tried recorded me singing it but it was a disaster

=p

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blackpredator11

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Posted April 13, '11 11:38am UTC

yeap, its only a poem, but its good

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ramzaman

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Posted April 13, '11 10:12pm UTC

well if anybody actually wanted to make this into a REAL song.. id say screamo.. sing the verse..scream the chorus..and sing the last chorus at then end realllyy slow like(:

but mostly its just a poem.
and thankss nemo, knight, and predator(:

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