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ArtemisDragon
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My first chapter of my new story.
Chapter Oneanger

November 13.2230 Hours
It was a cold night.Me and my squad were trailing a group of men who were accused of buying and selling guns with one of America's biggest gangs."I wonder will this get intresting" my seccond in command,Cpl.Treyarch,said."I dont know but I hope not"I said.
The van we were trailing stopped.Two men got out and ran inside a building."Treyach,Dunn and Mickey get in there and find out whats going on" I ordered."Yes sir" Came the response.I drove the our car back up the road.After hiding it I went back up the street and into the building.
"We got them sir"Dunn informed me."Any info on what they were doing here?."Dunn sighed"Yes they were trading explosives.Enough explosives to blow up the pentagon.The 4 upstairs floors are full of explosives."
We headed back to our car where five men were looking inside.When they noticed us they shot at us.âGet in coverâ I shouted.I hid behind the wall poping in and out and shot two of them.Treyarch threw a gernade killing them but blowing up our car.âAny causulties?.âI asked.âMickeyâ
âOk lets get out of hereâWe moved down the road shooting more mercaneries.A truck drove past and exploded as an RPG hit it.âMove into that buildingâI said while pointing at a bar.âDont shoot the civilians.Dunn gaurd the door,Treyarch go and get some chairs to block the door.Civilians remain calm.âWhen there was a strong barricade Treyarch started to look out the window.
âThere are 10+ mercenaries outsideâ.âOkâ I said âTransport will arrive 10 minutesâ then an explosion rocked the door.Dunn shot two men through a hole in the door.Another explosion hit the door and it collapsed.Civilians rushed out and most got killed.I through a smoke gernade out at the enemy.âGo,go,goâI sprinted out shooting people with my M-16.
Dunn and Treyarch jumped into a truck.âGet in the back Stewart.âI climbed in and we sped off.Smashing through barricades on the streets.We hit a barricade made out of steel and the truck toppled over.I hit my head and it start bleeding heavily.âStewart,stewart come on we got to goâI climbed out and found two ally trucks,several mercaneries and civilians everywhere.
âProtect the civiesâSgt Thomas shouted while instructing the civilians where to go.âGunnery Sgt Stewart get into the back of one the trucks.âWhen I was in the back with Dunn and Treyarch it start moving.
November 14.0126 Hours
âWowâDunn said âThe pentagonâ I looked out the window to see the stange beauty of the pentagon.When we arrived we were escorted to a meeting room still in our battle gear.A man came into us âStewart Talon,James Dunn and Damien Treyarch?â he asked.

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ABarOfSoap
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I suggest transferring this into Notepad to get rid of all the strange symbols.

psnz
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Peasant

It really is a curse, sometimes, when unicode symbols don't display properly in the AG2 forums. I really hope this gets sorted for AG3.

kingjac11
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From what i can read it seems good but you need to get it fixed.

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