Life is a waste of time.Time is a waste of life.So let's get wasted,and have thetimes of our Lives:PJust a poem a made up.
Interesting. but you may want to come up with more stuff.
I'm not exactly sure what to say here...do you want me to critique it, or are you just providing it for our entertainment?
You got the small part downIt is good, but I can't really give you any actual critique without something more.
lol i like it. makes sense to me :P
I like it but it needs to make more sense. If I was to rate it I'd give you 7/10
Just a funny little poem i made up
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