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Is it fine if I call you SK? "Knight" has already been sorta taken by an active user named "knight_34"

Anyways, SK, have you ever written lymirics? It seems a lot like one, perhaps you would be great at making them.

But again, I'm no poem critic, I have no feedback as for that poem, itself...

An acroustic poemm is where One uses a word to make a poem

example:

G
H
O
S
T
S

That is what I done and yes you can call me SK

Um you already have a poetry thread, you don't need another.

That wasnt supposed to be submitted and I have asked a moderator to shut it

I am just gonna change this to Knight's Poetry.

So here is one:

The fool(Me)

Right in front of me was a wall,
Standing there, big and tall,
What should I have done,
Should I have had some fun.

But no I was a fool,
I thought it would make me cool,
Instead it made me brake an arm,
And now I'm just sitting here on my family farm.

If I had been bright,
My arm would be alright,
But You cannot blame me for what I done,
I was just trying to have some fun.

What do you think

I think this is really good poetry

The poem would be better if the lines were about equal length. It would make it flow better.
Keep on writing!

Ok well I think they are near same length but thanks for pointing that out