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And this is in the AMW because..?
And actually, no I can't relate. I don't there has ever been a time when all of these six people have been in my house at once.

That really made no sense whatsoever, and not in the funny way either. I really don't get the point of this. And I can't really relate either.

I'm new to this poem biz... Ill quit while I'm behind.

To be honest, I didn't realize it was a poem. I thought it was just sort of a discussion about family members' views on gaming or something that ended up in the wrong forum. I don't really think the way you wrote what they said fits a poem.

"Older brother: fun"

It looks more like some kinda script or something.

"Fun", the older brother said.
or
The older brother said "Fun"

would at least make it sound a bit more like a story or a poem.

Don't quit! Just... not everything can be poetry.
If you want to get into this, make your own thread, not just something new for every piece.

Funny.