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ramzaman
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ramzaman
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Farmer

okay..wrote this..last song i put up alot of people were asking about how it should sound or be sang..so..i just sorta came up with a key. i made it a screamo song..thats the kinda music i like..im putting this here for people to give me feedback on the actual song..not what it sounds like..and you really dont need to pay attention to the key..but for those of you who like to sorta hear it in your head..its there
kay..thanks(:

Ill never forget you

[KEY]
⢠{} = scream
⢠a.b.c. = deep scream
⢠- = pause


[Verse 1]
today i saw the leaves change
Seems my life has been rearranged
Its all passed by so fast
Everything now is just the past

[Chorus]
{And ill never forget you
And i wish we could start a-new
now its been said and done
Though i know that happiness never works
Seems my life is just filled with hurt
..but ill} {never.forget-.you}

[Verse 2]
As it all started to fade away
{I just begged for you to stay}
Thats all i really could say
{And you just went your own way}

[Chorus 2]
{Though ill never forget you
I wish we could start a-new
But now its been said and done
And i know that happiness never works
Seems my life is just filled with hurt
..but ill} {never.forget-.you}

[Bridge]
now i still remember you
I hope you remember me
I remember everything we had
Looking back it just {makes.me.sad.}
But i know your still mine
And ill have you {again.with.time}

[Chorus 3]
{And ill never forget you
And i wish we could start a-new
But now its been said and done
Though i know that happiness never works
Seems my life is just filled with hurt}
..but ill never forget you

{Ill never-forget-you...}

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AvengedSevenfold11
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Thats really good lyrics, but im not shure they really work with screamo. but like i said really good lyrics, how would the guitar part work out?

AvengedSevenfold11
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cmon somebody else needs to comment on this!

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