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Parsat
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Do you have any Christian poetry to share? I will be happy to read it.

Here's a villanelle I wrote for Good Friday.

It Was Done
He breathed His last in pain, and it was done:
His blood poured down in loving sacrifice.
Truly this man was the Christ, God's son!

His senses He would not consent to stun
With wine that had been laced with gall and spice:
He breathed His last in pain, and it was done.

There was no pain He did not know, not one:
The lash, the mocking word, denial thrice.
Truly this man was the Christ, God's son!

The darkness now in sorrow veiled the sun,
The earth shook as it offered all its vice.
He breathed His last in pain, and it was done.

Thus said the gory, awed centurion
Who placed Him on Rome's cruelest death device:
"Truly this man was the Christ, God's son!"

O death! Your vicious sting has been undone
By Jesus, King of Kings, who paid the price!
He breathed his last in pain, and it was done:
Truly this man was the Christ, God's son!

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thisisnotanalt
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. . . And this, Armorgames Art, Music, and Writing section, is how you write a villanelle. The refrain was a perfect fit and as with all of your poems, it was quite a joy to read.

kingryan
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Ah brilliant Parsat! Can we expect a sequel?

Nurvana
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They should have read this at my parish's service today, while we kissed the cross; it'd have given me chills.

Parsat
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The Weak to Shame the Strong
1 Corinthians 1:27-29


Where is the thinker of this age?
The great philosopher?
Where is your wisdom now, O sage?
What hope can it assure?

Now speak, O image, iron wrought,
O idol, carved from wood!
You tarnish and dissolve to rot
As manmade objects would.

And would all mysteries be solved
If logic made all known?
The one word--why--would be unsolved:
Life's meaning still unknown.

Your works of good weigh not on scales,
This is no balance beam.
Your heart, not fully pure, still fails
The moral law supreme.

The strength of heroes of renown
Has rotted into bones.
Those clever minds that once bore crowns
Are cold and dead as stones.

But Him who lives forevermore
Will persevere for long:
His power has provided for
The weak to shame the strong.

Where once we were but fools and things despised,
His death brought life eternal as the prize.

Nurvana
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How do you DO that?!?

Parsat
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All You Who Thirst
Isaiah 55

All you who thirst, I hear you cry:
My water shall refresh the dry.
I am the Lord your God above
Who fills the empty with His love.

All you discouraged, do not cry:
Anointment oil will I supply.
I am the Lord your God above
Who fills the empty with His love.

All you who harvest, know your cry
Shall draw the rain out from the sky.
I am the Lord your God above
Who fills the empty with His love.

All you who sinned, now hear my cry:
"It is over, now I die!"
I am the Lord your God above
Who fills the empty with His love.

All you who follow, do not cry
When all you have you must deny.
I am the Lord your God above
Who fills the empty with His love.

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Hey, mind if i made a song out of this im a guitar player for my youth group and I contantly make songs but, not lyrics and these look great

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