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Paarfam
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One more death then Nirvana then death more one more death
More death then Nirvana then death more one more death then
Death then Nirvana then death more one more death then Nirvana
Then Nirvana then death more one more death then Nirvana
Nirvana then death more one more death then Nirvana

A picture, poem, thought, and dementor all in one!


Famed for a fault
Shamed surely of shaken shafts
Blamed by blasphemous boasts
Damed dearly with dastardly deeds
Smashed souls see in sight
Silver slits solely promising
Happy, healthy lives
After an abrupt
Loving life layed into lie
Anewstart
A newstart
A new start
Thisis
This is
This is a new start.



Pandemic as it may seem
The night sky still gleams
After the team
Was rejected and deemed
Hopeless



What are lights
That go bright
In the night
Do they fight
Wielding kites
With only slight
Being as they plight
Or they bite
At all in sight
With great spite

Just what are
Lights?

I just moved some old work here. I didn't like the name of my previous thread, so I made a new one. Please make suggestions, because I love others' input, unlike most people. If you have works that you'd like to share place them here.

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Paarfam
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I'm not sure what you meant, but, yes? It feels good to have a fan.

murasaki9
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Oh, that's okay. Idk either. What I do know is that I'd like to
have someone to share ideas with. You can always post on my thread.
I'll be there saying crazy things.

Paarfam
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K, sounds great! I'm sure I'll post there in the future!

Paarfam
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Quite guiding me! I can find my way down my path of destiny on my own! If you don't stop I'll have to be forced to eliminate you all!

As I remember my last moment of happiness
How, at that time, I felt so shameless
Sitting, smiling stupidly and softly
And then I found you
You led me to believe a life anew
Reserved strictly for me
Now I can't find a moment's peace
How I wish I could smile again
Instead I'm smashed by zen
Can I just die now?
You can also find this on Mursaki9's poetry page!

cowmaster1
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I really liked your one on how everything would be better with a smaller population

Paarfam
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Look at me now
Look at what you did
You did this how?
Adieu I'd like to bid
Thanks for the scars
The marks from bars
The burns from stars
The bumps from cars
I'm broken
I won't give revenge
I will remain peaceful
I speak with words
Hear's an earful:

No matter how much someone can break remember that they'll get theirs someday, they'll be far from home soon, lost even.

Why would they hurt so many souls?
Is that just how it goes?

If it is I'll quit while I'm behind
Let God help me once again retrieve my shine

As the stars gives us light
The evils get night
What they deserve is not to die
But burn

Paarfam
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In this world of doom
A flower can still bloom
It may seem impossible
But it's just improbable
When a flower erupts from the ground
Sunshine gets created abound
Following sunshine brings smiles
Then they make evil agile
For hopefulness to combat evil
Then greatness is painted on the easel
Of life
Happiness is born
From a world of suffering
How good it is

Paarfam
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Music is man's greatest invention
All with great intention
Metal, pop, rock, country
Jazz, blues, and more I guarantee
So many styles, so many tastes
Write notes on a slate
Play with several instruments
Wait for the solo, the summit
Names in music history
Too many to mention, the nest a mystery
Favorite bands abound
Wait, a new great was found
Never stop listening
New songs all glistening

I'd like some suggestions for the last few, it'd be nice.

Paarfam
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Correction

the nest a mystery

*the nest* should be *the rest*
What it should be:
the rest a mystery
Paarfam
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Be yourself
By yourself
Better protect yourself
Or you won't be yourself
You should kill yourself
I don't like yourself
Actually, I hate yourself
You have no reason to argue with yourself
You also hate yourself
I know it, and also knows it is yourself

Pretty gritty, huh? I just had to get some anger out of my system, some people are very annoying.

Paarfam
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The future...
Metal on metal
Ships 'cross the big black
Thoughts expand
Until one has 'covered
'Covered the secret
'Covered the great held
Give others a chance
Others expand
Into happiness
Great future I see
Do you?



When creating this I left quite a mystery hidden by making the grammar confusing, very experimental. Does it work?

Paarfam
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On this night
In the tainted moonlight
Devil comes for an ending fight
I know I'm not quite right
Devil comes in for a screaming bite
I wield my flaming kite
Devil's face comes to ignite
Why he holds his rites
I'll find when I plight
I feel fellow fright
He's in my sight
I'm in his light
I come in with might
As strong as a knights'
He is not polite
As he draws his scythe
My head gets terribly tight
As I begin to site
His evil, evil write
I have extreme spite
As big as a giant's not as quite
I shall invite
Him back to his hell, upright
I begin to recite
Prayers as I outright
Take him into flight
We go to negative heights
Into death, Hell we go...

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Nice word choice. The ending sentence in the last one, did you intentionally make it not ryhme?


By the way, I would love it if a bro like you critiques my thread.

Paarfam
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Thanks, yes, and sure, I'll take a look at your thread right now!

Paarfam
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Strength in numbers
Night in slumbers
One mistake you're a fumbler
Cut logs for lumber
Media makes you dumber
We make you number
We are hunters

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