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Okay... so I think I'm going to write a story. And, yes... I might even finish it this time. So, first, I need your peeps input! I don't want to write it if people aren't interested in it.
So, I'm going to write a prologue/summary of the plot for you guys to read. If you guys like it I will write the first installment. I wrote to v. of the prologues just for you to understand it better/get a better idea of the story. It's a bit confusing, but worth the read!
Here we go!
-------------------------Prologue V.1-------------------
Cast out of their world and into a total wasteland
The Hero, fighting for what's right.
The Slave, finding a place for himself.
And the Tyrant, confused and dangerous.
All with the same ambition, to gain control of the land of Mulgarath.
Here is their story, here is there mission.
-------------------------Prologue V.2-------------------
"Yessss, the item of power. We shall use this to tip the scales and seize the land of Mulgarath for myself!" Hissed the Choas lord, frightening his demon-minions with his madness.
"But... m-my lord. Your Choas is already at an all-time high from the power of the gods. If we shall get this item of power... it will amplify your Choas to an unstable level and-..."
"You fool!" the lord screamed, cutting off his demon minion and sending him flying across the dark room with Choas. "Don't you see? We must have this to defeat the Choas monster! There is no other way!"
After cooling down, he addressed his general, and said, "Send a scout to search for the item of power."
"Yes, M' Lord." the general pointed a finger towards a stout demon with a rather large hunchback, and he scuttled off out the makeshift wood doors.
"Yesss. Nothing shall stand in my way, nothing!"
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I know it's a bit confusing, but it's the only way I could tell it you without the prologue sounding kinda juvenile.
I hope you liked it! Please give me feedback!