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Here's a collection of gems I made today -

Okay, you asked for critique, so I'll give you some, I'm just going to be honest.
- The fat black outlines are sorta ugly, I just don't think they're necessary. Maybe 1x1 line of black, but not that much.
- There's very little detail, I opened the red gem up in Gimp and zoomed all the way in and could hardly see the shadings.
- It doesn't really look like a gem, it's flat-ish.

BUT! I'm not going to leave you at that, I'm going to actually help you.
As I said, I took it into gimp, and I made it look a bit better.

What I did to improve it
- Trashed that black line
- Added some reflections
- Added 3D sides, to make it look 3D.
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I hope this helps!

Yea, and not all gems are rectangular.

Here's a ramdom flag I made, no clue what for though.



And here's a camo gun I made too.

A few things.

1. You asked for constructive criticism. Oak gave you some. Did you not like CC? You didn't respond. Just wondering.
2. I do think your drawings are flat. The gun is nice, there's some detail, but again, like Oak said, there isn't enough shading for it to look more 3 dimensional.
3. Not all gems are rectangular. Make some circular ones! Or diamonds!

A few things.

1. You asked for constructive criticism. Oak gave you some. Did you not like CC? You didn't respond. Just wondering.
2. I do think your drawings are flat. The gun is nice, there's some detail, but again, like Oak said, there isn't enough shading for it to look more 3 dimensional.
3. Not all gems are rectangular. Make some circular ones! Or diamonds!

I'm intending for my drawings to be 3 dimensional.

I know not all gems are rectangular.

And I start out by making things and see what looks good and I consider that random because I didn't have an idea in my head.

I mean you spelled random wrong twice. I felt like informing you. And you didn't acknowledge Oak's CC. :P

haha an art room come up with someing every day