Human LifeMan is an interesting creatureof different size, statue, and feature.He can live his life asif there was no tomorrow.Running up debts and going tothe bank to borrow.He can be thrifty and shrewdbuy only the things he needs.Not like are politicians whichare motivated by their greed.And for the general publicthey can't do a good deed.
Good poem well, structured but, i feel you should take your time and not be afraid to make it longer i mean human life isnt a simple thing lol
good poem dude!
I was a fan of the last two paragraphs. in the second line of the first stanza, (im picky) the sylables just seem a little of. it would be nice and flow better if you chopped of one of the words.
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