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iamnotironman
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Well,I made this before and it was really popular.When I became inactive it became dead.So now that I'm reactive,lets give it a go!

Rules:
1 poem per person
Judges cannot post poem unless your not judging that time.
Every competition is 1-2 weeks long
Poem must relate to the topic.
If poem does not relate to topic it will not win.If another judge picks someone who didn't relate to the topic enough,I will change the winner.
Every letter must relate to the topic

Example:
Fun times
Returning hopefully again
Important to each other
Enjoying each other
New friends forever
Doing fun things together
Stay in touch!

I just copied that from the Internet.Please don't if your competing.
First topic is Happiness.So get arcosting!

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iamnotironman
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Wow,no poems.Two more weeks until hopefully this gets some poems.

xXKashitoXx
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Joyful times
Uplifts happiness
Bypasses sadness
It is a satisfying feeling
Lets peace around you
Away from madness
Thrilled with excitement
Intrinsic joyful feelings
Open Minded
Never Ending Love!

MoonFairy
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You write an acrostic by using the words letters, like Life.

L
I
F
E

And you write it from there. Get it?
Let's specify the example that ironman gave us.

Fun times
Returning hopefully again
Important to each other
Enjoying each other
New friends forever
Doing fun things together
Stay in touch!

That theme was Friends. See?

I was a part of this last time, I was thinking about making one, but I already have the Tanka contest, so I'm good.

I'll try to do a rough one on my break.

How much time can pass before,
All of the joy is gone?
Passing the time with friends
Puts a smile on my face
I wonder if there is a limit
Now that my smile is gone
Every time my grin leaves
Somehow it returns
So I know that I'll be okay.

Eh, whatevs. It sucks, but I don't have time to make it not suck as much.

xXKashitoXx
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Oh man. I didnt read carefully to where it says the topic is Happiness. Oh well.

MoonFairy
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Well, from the last acrostic thing we had, it had to be the theme. But The last rule in the op says every letter must match the theme.
Sorry jeol.

Quirinus1
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The eerie path

Her hair long and soft,
April touches my hand.
Please never stop touching
Please never stop loving me, because
I will never stop loving you.
Now she comes closer, and whispers:
Eerie place, how did we land up here?
She is scared, but I bring her comfort
Such is the embrace of lovers, such is happiness.

iamnotironman
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This ends June 8th.Sorry for my absence.YEA!Some people gave poems.Jeol,Ka****o,Moon Fairy,and Quirinus.

iamnotironman
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Once again sorry for being gone.Top 3 is coming up.No description though,and you will make the top 3 because there was 3 people that gave one.

3.Quirinus1
2.MoonFairy
1.JEOL!!!!!!!!!!!

Congrats Jeol on winning the first one and the next topic is life.The deadline is on the 18th.

iamnotironman
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No one wants to join?Then I will.

Live life
It wont stay forever
Forever is to long
Eternal it is not

Try to make poems longer then this.It won't win.

chitown
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Hey Ironman, you should be like disqualified or something, you copied off yahoo answers.
See?

iamnotironman
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Yea I should of said as an example.It is an example people.Not my on.Please dont send me to jail.

ProfessorOak
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Hey Ironman, you should be like disqualified or something, you copied off yahoo answers.

The question is...
Why were you searching on Yahoo Answers for one? O:
Were you trying to cheat, or just making sure his wasn't copied? o:
MoonFairy
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Yea I should of said as an example.It is an example people.Not my on.Please dont send me to jail.


What you did is plagarism and we don't take that jokingly or kindly here, but I believe if you officially state that Acrostic, along with a link where you got it from and explain it is an example, you should be in the clear.
deathopper
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Living it at it's fullest
I try to make it a happy one
Fulfilling my hopes and dreams until death.
Enthusiastic about the future life has planned.

Here's a quick one I whipped up right now.

chitown
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Why were you searching on Yahoo Answers for one?

I was looking for examples because it seemed like people wern't getting how to do this. I then saw that ironman had the same acrostic as one I found on a website.
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