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thecattygrl
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I hear a bunch of people are making poetry threads so I decided to try it.


BTW - You can thank jacksonghuntington for me being back on here.


Here is my first poem... ENJOY!


FYI - I'm not going to put actual people's names on here so they have been starred out (*)


Background: This poem was written as so I could remember all the inside jokes between me and my best friends. It didn't really work... just made it more difficult... GOOD LUCK!!


INSIDE JOKES FTW


Hello Ladies

Edward here

My son, Jacob

She's also my mirror.


Hello Ladies

Remember me?

Look around

What do you see?


Hello Ladies

I'm the good twin

And remember ***

He's the most FWIN.


Hello Ladies

Use Old Spice

Somehow I'm Jacob's father,

Twice.


Hello Ladies

Acting Mary-Sue

And Chuck Norris

Beats all of you.


Hello Ladies

Again it is I

Cake is OK

But not as good as pie.


Hello Ladies

The ears... they are back

My son is a wolf

But for some reason, she quacks.


Hello Ladies

Joining the seals

Disco Gnome here

Jasper knows how it feels.


Hello Ladies

Want Breaks lollypop

We wear LEATHER PANTS~!

And sing about Hitchcock


Hello Ladies

We play children's card games

Just add zombies

To anything lame.


Hello Ladies

I'm the Old Spice Guy

And my sidekick's name

Is Super Frie.


Hello Ladies

54%

The amount of my teenage lifee

That's been badly spent.


Hello Ladies

This is the end

My greetings

I send.


You just lost the game.


I'm on a horse.

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Nurvana
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Hah I think it's a pretty boss poem. I deem it a win.

wolf1991
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Is that all one thing? It looks like a bunch of smaller poems crammed together. I don't know though, everything is double spaced...

jacksonghuntington
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Welcome back!!! I remember this in school. just an idea, last line should be "backwards" . get it ???

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Thanks guys... This is my favorite... The rest won't be as good.

Background: This is a poem based on a story me and my best friend made while being spazzes on Gmail.

[/b] Resemee's Ice-Cream Shoppee [/b]

Can you imagine
The hate that he feels?
Having to serve Ice-cream
To eat his meals.

We brought an event
That one great day
Involving two real boys
And an ice-cream shoppee.

You think I'm kidding
I swear it is true
OK... that's a lie
But what's it to you?

It began quite simple
But like all the others
It got WAY out of hand
All thanks to brothers.

I stole her wrench
'Cause I had no matches
Couldn't give it to ****
Though she tries to snatches.

*** tries to protect her
We all know why
*****! STOP SWEARING!
NO! I'M NOT HIGH!

We all go to get ice-cream
Don't need to go fars
We aren't there a moment
Before in walks, Bruno Mars.

Before we can blink
Break soon is there
Him and Emily under the table
Giving *** quite a scare.

We hear a fangirl squeal
'Cause we all know ***** would
*** and *** are concerned
Just as good boyfriends should

There was no real conclusion
'Cause we had to go
And THIS is why we don't go on the computer
When it starts to snow.

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Background: This is a poem I wrotelast night. This is, swear to God, what it was like for me. It's supposed to be a free style pom but it probably won't work as I had origanally set it up so... bear with me. Around the edges of the poem, there are supposed to be a whole bunch of random things thrown in there. I put these at the bottom in italics... Sorry this isn't really that easy to put up guys...

Joseph 2

Twinkle
Twinkle

THE
Lights
are
fading
ever
so
slowly

sloooooow daaaaancinnnng muuusic

I can't hear
The world
Around me

It's total madness
But I can't tell

"Are you happy?"
Yes... yes I am

"You're amazing."
You are too.

You totally should
Who?
Hey you!
Click
Picture
Who?
You guys are so cute!
Ahhh!
Hey!
Ahhh!
PARTY MUSIC!
OMG!
Hey!
You do?
Hey you!
Who is it?!
Have you?
Picture
XD
OMG!
Click
Camera
Dance with him!
Hey you!
~Click~


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=)

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Background: My best friend is in denial of who she likes so I wrote this poem for her... Enjoy Jacob! It's written as if I'm her parent (father obviously).

Black Bride

Dear Miaann
Young and sweet
Whom will be the man
That sweeps you off your feet

Could it be him?
Or maybe him too?
Whom is this man
Whom comes to you?

Free as a wild bird
It just won't do
Whom be the man
Whom be wed to you?

Is it but a soldier
Or an accountant too?
Is it but a rich man
Whom is right for you?

Could it be him?
Or maybe him too?
Whom is this man
Whom comes to you?

Whomever he may be
Where your heart may go
We'll soon give away
The Black Bride we know

Could it be him?
Or maybe him too?
Whom is this man
Who comes to you?

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Background: My brother came home and for some reason asked me what's up. I replied with you know⦠the usual. The yoosh? He asks. The yoosh I agree. Then I wrote this poem. I don't care how stupid of a background that was⦠at least you get one. Btw: the ? is becuz I don't know what Jaske poem this is. Probably 2 or 3 but regardless.

Jaske ?

A funny looking kid
With a funny looking mind
He has funny looking thoughts
All the funny looking time.

Has a funny looking house
An a funny looking nose
Works with funny looking numbers
Wherever he funny looking goes.

Has a funny looking swagger
And a funny looking talk
Plays with his funny looking brothers
At the funny looking park.

This funny looking kid
Is like no funny looking other
For this funny looking kid
Is my funny looking brother.

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The two last poems were actually interesting; more legit than the previous ones, though the latter of them two was a little abusive with the ''funny'' adjective. I'd strongly advise you to keep writing, and read as many poetry as you can, be it here on the forums or elsewhere.

Somehow, you remind me of Moon when she started here. Hyper, random, a little crazy; spilling here and there you know

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Thank you ever so much FallenSky. I definitely will continue writing.

As for the most recent poem (Jaske ?) I purposely used the same phrase too much because that is a lot what my brother is like. Extremely repetitive.

- thecattygrl

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Background: This story is about someone who is so expected and not feared that they are pretty much begging people to fear them but are really bad at it. ENJOY!

Be A Fraid

Be afraid
Be very afraid
Ever since we started out
We've had no fraids

Some to torchor
Or make us look tough
Someone below us
Who really must suck

Be afraid
Fraids are quite cool
They get rejected
And beat up at school

Oh come on
It really is fun
I was born afraid
And look what I have become.

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Background: All I'm going to say is that this poem comes from really strange convo starters. This is a sneaky poem and you may think u know what I'm talking about but you don't.

A Jacob-Dactal

Up in the sky
Flying above the clouds
I once saw a Jacob-Dactal
It really was quite louds.

It didn't shut up
Yet had very little to say
It usually hunted at nights
And tried to sleep during the day.

Sometimes it got lonely
Sometimes it got sad
It went by many names
Including, sometimes, Mad.

(as in Mad Cow Disease).

It had been looking for a while
As all its friends had moved on
For another FWIN - a - dactal
For it to lean on.

And though it doesn't see it
And maybe it needs a life
I hope it knows I love it
And that that is a sharp knife.

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Background: Testing. If you are going to get it, you just did.

Mid-a-way point

The mid-a-way point
It finally has come
Two tests then
Two tests now
And still two tests to come.

The ones who came before us
They have it just as bad
Two tests then
Two tests now
And still two tests to come.

Soon it will be over
But only for the summer
Two tests then
Two tests now
And still two tests to come.

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Background: this poem surrounds completely around the feeling like you need to belong somewhere because everyone says you do.

One Last Kiss

A day is dawning
Out come the fawnlings
The bright sun
The day has begun
And young ones are yawning

The scene is perfect
Yet nothing is left
The darkness is blinding
There's no hope of finding
The clean, flowing current

A dream of forever
The mind can be clever
The reasons to be
Is so that they see
It can be justified never

I wait for a sign
To ease my mind
Having few friends
Upon which to depend
At least not any to kind

One last kiss
To end all of this
The sorrow to come
Has grown quite numb
And all that is left is the bliss

The last reminder
That he can find her
Has blown away
'Til another day
And yet none that she met will be kinder

The colors they fade
Soon ends the wade
Of people who know
Where she will go
And if she will stay in the shade

Things start to rise
And she hopes it'll be a surprise
But to return
All the bridges, they burned
And noone can compromise

The end is near
And noone can see her
Not even the life
Can try to survive
If itself is to fear.

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Background: (Ihatethisthing) This poem is in relation to my new YGO fanfic; The Millennium Earrings. For those of you who haven't read it, Seto and Anna-Beth meet under extremely lucky sercomestances (Ra, myspellingsucks) or is it? Come to find out, Anna-Beth's earrings contain a magical spirit that threatens the fate of the whole world... And the ever so sudden liking Seto has taken to this girl. Written in his POV. 

Eye Of The Kaiba

Bright days are dissinagrating
Life, as I know it, fading
The future is waiting
While fireflies are mating

The thought of forever
Was just as quickly severed
We had thought, never
But fate is more clever

A love for something fake
Is less likely to shake
The needs to make
An attempt at staying awake

I can't stop here
Among all the endless fear
I'll always hold near
The things that I hold dear

When challenges arise
It comes as no surprise
A Kaiba has no allies
But then why does it hurt when she cries?

I must face reality
Love is just a formality
When in actuality
She has no sense of morality

To see another with her
My strong barrier begins to wither
I can't let myself simmer
In the fate that will recur. 

Not again with fate
Why cant the speech wait
I have to much on my plate
Ha! A filthy girl like her, my soul mate?

But what if it is true?
What would someone else do in my shoes?
She says my eyes are so blue. 
Is there anything I can do?

Stop this nonsense NOW!
This I won't allow
She isn't worth your furrowed brow
So why do you insist on having a cow?!

If only I were him
What's his name? Joe, Jack or Jim?
Man, he must be dim
To love a girl so close to the rim

I just want to be in control
And for her to stop taking her toll
If her heart isn't even still whole
Then how can she still have a pure soul?

I made the mistake of taking her to Domino
And now she's going to need to show
The dark side that I hate so
Is that the price I pay for what I know?

She cares of everyone to much
A true duelist shouldn't be such
I can't remove the memory of her touch
Is there finally a girl within my clutch?

Yugi and his pals will see
How little time it takes for me
To turn my back on this flea
She'll understand, won't she?

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Background: This poem is another one based off of my YGO fanfic. It has to do with how Anna-Beth goes through what Zalia did so many years ago, in ancient Egypt. For those of you who don't get the comparison, Zalia (Who is the darker spirit) has green/hazel eyes while Anna-Beth (Who is the innocent, pure, light one) has Brown eyes.  Somewhat of a shorter poem. 

These Brown Eyes Are Turning Green 

In comparison to long ago
The future holds tales untold
But what if history can change
But the future must remain. 

A part from the thrill of fight
And anger deep inside
My ancient queen was once a child
So sweet, innocent and mild. 

An anger deep inside her
And one that lies in me
Drives the death of us all
To only lead to eternal fall. 

With each life time that we waste
With each soul that we take
We have no limits to our power
But we grow dark with each passing hour

We can't be sure 
it was all for him
For love is fake
Only a power hold we make

Annie, Zalia
Seto, Pharaoh
The lights are forever lost
We got our revenge, but at what cost?

I might fight
And I might try
But, I can't stop these brown eyes from turning green
Only her past knows what I mean. 

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