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metrotor
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Peasant

so here's a poem maybe a nerd would write...need some critics though..

NERD LOVE SONG
higher,higher than Everest,
deeper, deeper than Mariana Trench,
is my love for you, in my Cardiac Muscle.

my infatuation is further than the Cosmic Microwave
you are my pulse heat-wave.
whenever i see you, Sirius shines bright in my Oculi,
you are closer to me than, the sun is from mercury.

lighter, lighter than hydrogen,
brighter, brighter than quasars,
is my love for you in my cardiac muscle.

may your encephalon in your cranium,
think clearer than germanium,
my metacarpal be on your carpels
your tongue sharper than a scalpel.

wider, wider than your Imaginatio,
softer, softer than the sense of the Mechanoreceptors,
is my love for you in my cardiac muscle.

oh! come to me oh! puella pulchra
may you flow like river metra.
you are more adorable than a pregnant canine junior
of the species, Rare Brazilian Rasta Scottish Terrier

resistive,more resistive than Ruthenium,
rarer, rarer than Iridium,
is my love for you in my cardiac muscle.

love you forever,
like the infinity in the mind of this lover...



hehehe....completed this song/poem, just now(1:31 am, 25apr,2011),
i noe ts childish n nonsense, bt i ws bored nyways, i tried my best -A'Kshat
if u noe sumthin better, pls gimme sum suggestions......
DISCLAIMER
any similarity of characters, song line or feelings is purely coincidental....(:P)
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METROTOR A.K.A "A'Kshat"

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shailajaisrani
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it's funny but i don't know what half the words mean!

Dylanator
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Nomad

How does the tune go?

GQD
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There is no tune for thius mwhahahaha

dillsoccer
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Nomad

im still trying to understand half the song.

kingryan
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you are closer to me than, the sun is from mercury.


Well you're closer to me than the sun is from mercury too...
knight_34
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Quite entertaining. I suppose the value of this piece comes from the choice of vocabulary, despite some inconsistencies. I understood all of it.

River Metra?

SuperSaiyan22
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Hello everybody I am a nerd
Sometimes in school they say I'm a terd
But I'm a sexy boy so the girls always flirt
They give me attention I treat them like dirt
Now I'm hurt

metrotor
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Peasant

@yioup, well its poetic so some of the words are simile or metaphor....
@knight_34, river metra is an actual river which floods quite often, google it...

metrotor
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thanks for the comments guys...i really appreciate them.., so does my ego..:P

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